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@theinkwell
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4 minutes ago
Your story was nicely structured and balanced but would have benefited from more story and character development. We need to feel the hook. We need to understand the importanceβ¦
@abigail04
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about 3 hours ago
You are a good friend for always being so concerned. That girl must be ashamed of herself for what she had done. You even tried to help her after the devilish act she had put up to you.
@lara-bee
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about 4 hours ago
You are a nice person because if I am the one, I might not even look at her twice because thatβs what people like that deserve. I hope your friend passed the exam.
@hivebuzz
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about 5 hours ago
Congratulations @snowbhale! You have completed the following achievement on the Hive blockchain And have been rewarded with New badge(s) You distributed more than 200 upvotes.
@offia66
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4 days ago
Exactly,if only he had listened to her. Thanks for dropping by and welcome to hive
@theinkwell
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5 days ago
Thank you for confirming that, @snowbhale. Sometimes this happens. We can only recommend that you make sure you use unique phrases and be sure to read and use the tips in ourβ¦
@marriot5464
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5 days ago
You know people who are into novels never find love, right Oh Lord, is this why I haven't found .... Anyways we keep searching. Nice story by the way.
@terjix
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5 days ago
You know people who are into novels never find love, right?" I don't believe this.πππ And it was good that Kelly did the right thing.
@vincric
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6 days ago
Well, time and space definitely helped, I imagine things would have been bad if the confrontation happened right after Brandy was fired.
@theinkwell
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6 days ago
@snowbhale, your story is detected as at least partially written by AI, which we don't allow. Content editors that rephrase your sentences may lead to this result. The onlyβ¦
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