Comments by Saltycat (@saltycat) - Neoxian City

Saltycat

1 day ago

I really enjoyed your poem about the pineapple seller and your theme was also good - showing the ripple effect of positivity and personal improvement.

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1 day ago

This is complex. You convey a deep sense of loss and longing. The transition from beauty to despair is palpable.

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4 days ago

Your 'whore has the whole damned country by the balls' is a great line, arresting and sharp with social commentary.

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4 days ago

Your narrative voice is strong. The conversational tone you adopt engages the reader, almost as if it's a dialogue with the self. This approach enhances the relatability of the…

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8 days ago

Thanks for your interesting history. I love how international our site is. As a UK resident I can only say I can agree the time changes are a pain. No real discussion in the UK…

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8 days ago

Your most welcome friend

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9 days ago

A touching and relatable poem. Your vine metaphor, he keeps his vibes like a vine, I thought was very fitting given how vines are associated with growth and resilience. But also…

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12 days ago

Your poem shines with genuine warmth and love. I especially liked the line 'where i start my conversation from'. It is down to your conversational tone that it feels so intimate.

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15 days ago

i enjoyed the content of your poem. For me it really picked up from 'So much is involved in this business of mine.' It was all the examples of hard work that goes to showcase…

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15 days ago

Yes weather is a major conversation topic and we say the same thing here in the UK. I liked the poems familiar touch.

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