RE: Being in the drops: A Poem
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The cadence, how you split this piece into dual-line sections gave it an interesting flow (at least how I read it). I like how you tied each piece together, line after line.
Honey, Oil, Wine, Perfume
Intoxicating - something I'd describe each of those 4 things listed prior.
I really like this piece, thank you for sharing!
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