Being in the drops: A Poem
I'm but a drop of honey
On your tongue,
A drop of wine,
In your cup...
A drop of oil,
On your skin...
A drop of perfume,
On your hair...
Sweet and intoxicating,
I am smooth and soothing
Not seperate from you,
Nor ye seperate from me.
We are not seperate,
But connected...
To love.
We live like two drops,
But merge like two waves
The ocean cries forth,
The storm submerges...
Our ashes.
We're the ripples,
The waveforms...
In spacetime.
End
Subject: This poetry is about loving the mirror self and caring for the beloved one.
Note: Images used are generated using A.I tools and poet's imagination.
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Amazing poem dear.
I love this line.
You now gat a big fan of your creative writing.
Tnks, I keep writing new stuff...
The cadence, how you split this piece into dual-line sections gave it an interesting flow (at least how I read it). I like how you tied each piece together, line after line.
Honey, Oil, Wine, Perfume
Intoxicating - something I'd describe each of those 4 things listed prior.
I really like this piece, thank you for sharing!
You're welcome...
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