Verses of the Free Verse #3: The Moments Away
The Moments Away
Grateful for the moments away
From human traffic
Realize I always say
I want to change my bad habits
Never really taking any action
Addicted more to devices
Never fixing the old ones
Just picking up new vices
Is this all life is?
Material needs and prices
Led by the weak
Imprisoned the strong and poisoned the wisest
Who’s bright idea was this?
Who let them in the garden?
If I offended any snakes
Then I beg your pardon
But the control is real we may not heal
Most minds have been domesticated
Freedom that's buried deep in thought
May never be excavated
No longer wanted to dig deep
When the control escalated
Programmed to sleep
While ownership by elites got debated
None of us were in that discussion
We did not scream to be heard
We didn’t fight loud enough
For them to understand our words
We didn’t unite combine to fight
The systems when they emerged
Is it too late to fight now
With our might and courage?
Authored by:
@stewsak
Free Verse Poems
A free verse poem is an open form of poetry that doesn't follow any particular pattern. It's free from musical patterns, metering patterns, or rhyme patterns and is an innovative way of expression. A poet can explore natural creative speech that can be written in the way any poet wishes their creative expression to be.
Some legendary free verse poets include Carl Sandburg, who wrote the classic poem "Fog". A short but with direct artistic wordplay. Another legendary and amazing poet who became the first person to become commercially famous for free verse poetry was Langston Hughes. His free verse poem "I, Too" was one of the mandatory poems I had to read and I understood the artistic expression from him in those times. This poem still strikes an emotion in American racism and was printed by the New York Times on September 22, 2016, in response to the riots in North Carolina the day before.
Influence for "The Moments Away"
I often listen to people speak about being clustered in the world of media and the big city life. They tell me how they lose a piece of themselves every day as they chase their material needs. At least they're aware of it as most people don't even know they're in the rat race. "The Moments Away" was a piece that was written thinking of their pain and frustration.
Some of my past free verse poems:
Please take a moment to read "Apocalypse is Late"
Please take a moment to read "Apocalypse is Late"
Another Free Verse Poem:
Please take a moment to read "Life in Hand"
Please take a moment to read "Life in Hand"
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