They Look Cold ~ Original Haiku
(note: I had this scheduled to post an hour ago, but I just noticed it didn't post. Ecency has been having problems all week so I don't know. I'm going to manually post it at peakd. I canceled the scheduled post on Ecency, but with all their problems hopefully I don't end up with a double post here)
A few days ago it was a bit chilly in the morning. Warm now, but I guess that is how autumn works, back and forth. Anyway, when it was chilly I was out and saw something that made me pause and write this haiku.
walking to school
in summer uniforms
This was written a few days ago, before Oct 1st. That day is important because that is koromogae (衣替え), the day when school kids change from summer uniforms to winter uniforms. June 1st is when they do the opposite, switching from winter uniforms to summer.
The thing is, the weather sometimes doesn't coöperate with the school schedule and it starts getting cold in the morning when they are walking or riding their bicycles to school a few weeks before Oct 1st. Or it is still too hot after the switch in some years. In either case, the dates never seem to happen at the optimal time.
Some areas do change the dates of koromogae, such as Hokkaido where it is colder so they switch to winter uniforms sooner, and some areas allow a brief transitional period of a few weeks during which either uniform is allowed (this period is called ikōkikan, 移行期間), but many areas are more strict about the switch. I live in one of those areas. Every year when we get near Oct 1st I watch as the school kids look uncomfortable, either cold before the switch or hot after, or both.
The practice is said to have its roots in the Heian Era (794-1185) and were originally copied from Chinese customs. The current changing dates of Oct 1 and June 1 were established in the Meiji Era (1868-1912) after they changed from the traditional calendar to the Western one. Many public workers also do the same (for example, police officers) as well as many private companies. Not only that, but in the house many housewives switch the family clothes in the dressers from summer to winter clothes. It is always interesting when Oct 1st hits and suddenly everyone is dressed different!
Anyway, I wrote this haiku a few days before the switch when I was walking outside and noticed how cold some schoolgirls looked. Actually now we seem to be having a bump in the heat and it is hot again outside but everyone is wearing their winter uniforms now!
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Thanks for sharing your haiku and the very informational/educational details. I didn't know any of this.
You're welcome. Hope it was useful.
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Not useful for me besides explaining it later if I needed to. I write prose :)
I am reminded of uniformed days.
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Wow, very good I came across this. It is informative. Thanks for sharing this Haiku on how people change their clothes Oct and June.
Glad you enjoyed!
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There's something here, about haikus, that I don't understand David.
I've always written mine as:
5 syllables
7 syllables
5 syllables
But I also know that this a simplified, Westerner's intepretation. Can you point me towards some better teachings on the real rules for haikus? I don't get what you've done with yours; I assume you know far more about this topic than me!
Arigato gozaimasu!
Haiku are taught in schools in the West as something of a syllable counting game, so the syllable thing is very emphasized. That's why people have the idea that anything following 5/7/5 is a haiku. I'm sure you've seen many of the "poems" that mock haiku because of this. But beyond that basic level, a haiku is generally accepted as any short poem about nature. I think that is pretty close to the Haiku Association of America's definition.
In Japan there are at least two main schools of haiku: traditional and modern. The "traditional" one teaches that following the syllable count is critical, and that a nature word and some kind of break (kireji) is also necessary. I put traditional in quotes because this really wasn't the attitude before Kyoshi (the man who controlled haiku in the early 1900s). Even the great Bashō didn't always follow syllable count and often used more than one season word. The modern school by contrast teaches that free-form is ok, that season words are not necessary, that it doesn't even have to be about nature. One of the most famous examples of this was Santōka's haiku: oto wa shigure ka ("that sound / autumn rain?")
Anyway, that's a short summery. The takeaway is following a syllable count of 5/7/5 is perfectly ok, but also following a freeform style is also ok.
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I have no idea if that's poetry or just words. !LOL
Or maybe poetry is just that, a bunch of fancily arranged words. 😂
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I'd change the first like to "shall I try", but that could indeed be a haiku!
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