It's Either Now or Never
Unflinched
I glare at my nemesis from a distance
It's either now or never
I've been held captive for so long
I can't keep paying for the sins of my forefathers
It's either now or never
With every successive step I take
My mind is clouded with doubts
What if it all goes wrong?
What if I'm not strong enough?
What if I lose my life?
A little voice whispers in my ears
It's either now or never
I may not be the wisest of men nor the fiercest of warriors
But I rather die a hero than a coward
It's either now or never
My name would be remembered for generations to come.
My image would be sculptured and my praises sang
My successors would never would never again feel this pain
It's either now or never
| This is yet another of my attempts at poetry. This piece is in response to the #pictureprompt. |
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Beautiful piece..🤛
Thank you so much ✨
Woaaah, I enjoyed every piece of this poem.
It's either now or never, we learn to face our fears.
I'm glad you did🤗
This is the message. If we dont do it now, then the chances of doing it in the future are blurry..
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In this poem I see the cry of a young man who faces his destiny, wants to get out of the subdued life in which he finds himself and asks himself the necessary questions to free himself from the doubts that can hold him back. He knows that the risks are strong, but he prefers to die trying than to live in submission.
The poem is like a hymn to freedom. Greetings my friend.
You for the message very right.
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Impressive poetry skill. I am really impressed reading your poem. I liked it very much. Keep it up.
🤗🤗🤗 I'm glad that you liked it dear.
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Brilliant one! It's good he finally decided to go forth and do all he can to end whatever it is that holds him captive :) The verses go along well with the provided photo for the prompt.
Good luck!
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Ps; I've heard about the crew 3..
You're very welcome.
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Have a wonderful day gurl✨
My beautiful poetess. I'm constantly awed by the many talents you have and your willingness to go out of your comfort zone. I enjoyed reading this poem and seeing the power just emanate from the lines. !LUV it.🌺
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Nice poem, @wongi! "It's either now or never", I like the way that phrase flows, I think you did very well to repeat it. Cheers!
Oh thank you very much. I'm glad you liked it☺️✨
Keep writing poetry 👍❤️👏
This is my second attempt at poetry and I wonder how others do it.
They don't think about how they do it
They just do it. I think :)
Just keep doing what you did here. You can do it!
Thank you for the motivation. I'd hold on to it 🤗
So nice that you write poetry, keep on:)
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I rather die a hero than live like a coward
Love your poets now and forever
Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it ✨
I can appreciate the powerful imagery, feelings, and emotions your poem evokes dear poet, and the idea of not wanting to be held captive to the sins of the forefathers. The decision to take action and face one's fears is a courageous one, and doing so for a noble cause may inspire others to follow in your footsteps. Ultimately, the poem seems to be a reminder that life is short and fleeting, and that it is up to each individual to make the most of their time and leave a positive impact on the world.
Congratulations, I really enjoyed your poem
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I'm glad you liked the poem. It seems like you assimilated every line properly as you gave a very comprehensive summary of the poem.
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That is quite brilliant!
Can safely say you are a poet now!
An official poet after my second trial? Not bad at all😅
Thank you very much uncle T🤗
Oh you are so very welcome :)
Will have to get you to make a poem for Talk Time with Tengo or for Matilda hehe
I smiled when I saw this😃
That would be great! But, would I be given a picture to work with too?
Wow...
So all of y'all can write poetry 😔
See me the analyst feeling pressured
The analyst that can speak like a newscaster.... We are the ones feeling pressured 🤕
Woe is your praise ye Shakespeare Wong😂😂😂
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Very nice poem!
Deep and touching!
Thank you so much. I appreciate ✨
You are welcome 🙏