RE: Danger zone; Exploring some dangerous occupations around the world.

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These errors are repeated throughout the text and make the reading not fluent. A reader should be able to read the article with complete fluency, so we recommend applying the space required to solve the errors.

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Thanks for pointing those out, corrections would be made henceforth.

Thanks for the corrections, very well appreciated.

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