A DATE DEBATE.
after rounds of shots on shots
she took a shot of me
to have a clearer picture
my mind kept whispering,
now you can shoot your shot
to my surprise my lady acting all lost
she murmured
could this be love or lust
do you know what trust is
or you are just here to thrust
Love don't cost a thing ,
that's during the the times of our ancestors
I literally don't have you effortlessly won't give
is that love or a symbiotic affection
she replied
love is sweet , but added with money it's sweeter
Bitter truth , such a hard pill to chew
In a society driven by self-interest,
Where hearts are guarded, wrapped in defense,
Love's true essence can seem elusive,
Leaving us questioning its true sense.
Yet, love transcends material gain,
It goes beyond a transactional pact,
It's the warmth that glows from within,
A connection that goes beyond mere fact.
So, let's unravel the layers of doubt,
Discovering the truth that lies beneath,
For love requires vulnerability and trust,
To find the love that's beyond belief.
Let's navigate this journey together,
Exploring the depths of our souls,
Embracing the uncertainties and fears,
As our love story beautifully unfolds.
And as we find solace in each other's arms,
We'll know if it's love or just a passing gust,
For in the depths of our shared moments,
We'll find the answer, a love we can trust.
I like your poem. 👍
The topic is certainly popular, Love! ❤️
Lots to navigate but everyone seems to be on that journey to find true love.
Thanks for stopping by ! Indeed the quest of searching for true love comes with it's special bouts of uncertainty and doubts .
The lady in the poem got really deceptive ears but it's hindering her from experiencing real love I guess because she feels everyone is just being deceptive.
Love indeed is sweeter with money 🤭, get those bitter pills in your mouth and chew em real good. Twist your face if you wanna but the truth is bitter I guess.😂
She must have been treated really bad in her past . I see the lines you added, they are so on point. 💯
There's always a past that triggers present actions. 💜💜💜
Mhmm! A scar can't be like a perfect body skin !!
💯 fact.
Love goes beyond a lot of things. Trust begets another and when your heart sings to someone and your whole response to It.
Then we can give love a trial.
you've said it all, no other words truer .
Thank you.