Her Love Was What I Craved.

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Ron Lach

Love doesn't create excuses
It is beautiful and carefree
Passionate and amazing
Love was what I yearned for
Do you love me?

I stare at the night sky
The wonders so beautiful
I then turn to stare at the wall
Crying and sobbing into my pillow
Are you proud of me?

Looking at my friends,
Happy and excited,
Picture perfect family they had,
I want to be like them
What makes you happy?

I never craved attention till I tasted yours
You were like a drug,
So addicting
I've always wished to be you
Do you believe in me?

I've never wanted to quench a fire so bad
The fire of love and affection
The fire inside of me is burning
Burning to the point where I'm breaking
Are you okay?

I ask myself different questions like,
Is your smile like mine?
Are your eyes like mine?
Do you laugh as hard as I do?
Do you even know if I exist?

Mum.

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Looking at my friends,
Happy and excited,
Picture perfect family they had,
I want to be like them
What makes you happy?

Even in the midst of the worst crisis, you can be happy, @tozill .
Just accept the fact that how you feel no longer reflects what's going on around you. You can waltz to your own tune. You cannot find happiness, you need to produce it!

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This is like one of the best advice I've gotten. I'll sure be keeping it to heart. Thanks so much for the comment!

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We all went through our ups and down in life.
But in order for us to move on, we need to be selfish and put ourself first.
Love ourself and then we can love others better.
Take care and have a great day, @tozill.

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Love should leave in us.
We are the architect of our happiness, we produce it ourselves.
Thanks for the pieces

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Your welcome... thanks so much for the comment!

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Very nice writing very beautiful, I think love is the engine that moves the world definitely, thank you for sharing ♥

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I am happy to share.. thanks for the comment!

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