RE: LEANING HOME

thanks for a lovely lyrical poem.
your use of the quatrain for your stanzas is interesting and gives a pleasing rhythmic unity to the poem over all

when you come to redraft I'd suggest looking at how you can trim the odd word to make some of the lines flow smoother. Reading them out loud can often help with this. If you feel it makes the sentence structure a bit strange remember that you're a poet, you get to do what you want 😀