Hidden Behind the Gleam
the gleam that begins to crack
a shadow slowly dives
into the silence of time
but chaos still lurks
like a rose in silence
hiding its thorns
lies a hidden wound
a fractured smile
whispers a secret
reminding us of impermanence
that beauty and pain
always walk together
but within it
wisdom is found
and tranquility only blooms
from acceptance
This is such a deeply reflective and poignant poem. The imagery of the gleam cracking and chaos lurking beneath the surface really captures that sense of hidden pain behind appearances. I love the comparison of beauty and pain walking together—it feels so true and powerful. The idea that light isn’t always peaceful, but wisdom and tranquility come from acceptance, is such a beautiful reminder of life's complexities. You've woven these themes together so delicately. Wonderful work!
Thank you very much!