Poem: The rain (La lluvia) [EN/ES]

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The rain

Tears that fall from the sky and cleanse my soul of sadness and pain, drops that purify the impurities of my being.

Blessed water that caresses my face, runs all over my face giving me kisses as it falls to the earth.

Rain that bathes the earth with life, everything blooms when you fall, with your miraculous molecules of life.

Beautiful colors adorn the sky, when the raindrops and the sun work together in a meeting of love.

The landscape becomes abstract when the rain begins to fall, on the infinite horizon of the sky.

Precious rain, the world would be just an inert rock, you make the world a cradle where life is lodged.

I cannot imagine how existence can be sustained without the blessed and miraculous drops that bathe from time to time the bluish and marvelous globe, which we call earth, world, home.


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Español

La lluvia

Lágrimas que caen del cielo y limpian mi alma de tristeza y dolor, gotas que purifican las impurezas de mi ser.

Agua bendita que acaricia mi rostro, recorre toda mi cara dándome besos mientras cae hacia la tierra.

Lluvia que bañas la tierra de vida, todo florece cuando tu caes, con tus moléculas milagrosas de vida.

Hermosos colores adornan el cielo, cuando las gotas de lluvia y el sol se funcionan en un encuentro de amor.

El paisaje se vuelve abstracto cuando la lluvia empieza a caer, sobre el horizonte infinito del cielo.

Lluvia preciosa, el mundo sería solo una roca inerte, tú haces del mundo una cuna donde se aloja la vida.

No me imagino como puede sustentarse la existencia, sin las gotas benditas y milagrosas que bañan de cuando en cuando el globo azulado y maravilloso, el cual llamamos tierra, mundo, hogar.


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Sources of the cover image Source 1 Source 2 Edited by Rincón Poético.

Text authored by:
Camilo Torres
DRA

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Rain is a natural way of love to mankind. Every drop heals the world.

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Un hermoso canto para ese fenómeno natural que no solo alimenta la tierra, también lo hace con los sueños que se van tejiendo de nuestros sentimientos. Saludos.

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Rain is the elixir of life on the planet. Add the sun and the trees and you have the perfect ecosystem. Yet there'd be no tree, no life at all without rain. Interesting topic for a poem. Well done writing from that perspective.

Good day.

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Thank you for your kind comment. They are right the rain is the water of life.
Good day.

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Rain is also so beautiful and fun to play in as well. Have a hole big enough and it fills with water you can hold some baptisms. If that's your thing.

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What a beautiful homage to rain aka the tears that Gaia shares with all of us. You used very soft words making the poem sublime and delicate. Great rhythm with a special twist at the end.

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Thank you for such a beautiful comment, I am glad to know that you liked the poem.

Happy day.

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La lluvia es vida para todos nosotros, siempre me ha gustado, la disfruto mucho y una que otra vez me mojo xD, saludos ♥

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