Creative Nonfiction/The water costume (Eng/Esp)

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On Tuesday, the eve of carnival, I arrived at school to pick up Maxi, my six-year-old daughter. She was studying in a large school located in the town of El Limón, very close to the mountains and with a cool climate, unlike the oppressive heat in Maracay.

The elementary school was located in a separate area from the preschool and high school. There were the classrooms and a playground where the children played at recess.

The teacher, a brunette lady with curly hair and a smile on her face, a little tired from attending to the children in her first grade classroom, came over to greet me and give me some information.

"Hello, Mrs. Morela!, next week is Carnival Monday and Tuesday. As you know, there are no school activities and, as is tradition in the school, we want to have a parade with all the students of the school on Friday. We are going to parade through the streets of El Limón. The theme for our first grade was: nature"

I interrupted her at that moment.

"I love that theme!. Very important to raise the children's awareness".

"That's right! Well, as I was saying. The other teachers and I have selected several costumes, and your daughter was assigned the water costume".

I thought to myself. The teachers get very creative in these cases...a water costume.

"What do you think? -Can she do it?"

"Of course I can! I'll figure out how to do it"

I left with my daughter as I was figuring out how I was going to make the water costume. Furthermore, I had a lot of work this week and my mind was trying to figure out how I was going to fulfill this commitment to my daughter and school.

But once I got home, I got creative too and was encouraged to make the design. I wanted it to be something different.

Water is an element that is in motion, and although it is colorless, in the seas it looks blue and is the color that represents it. With these two characteristics, I set out to make the costume.

I bought my daughter a flannel and light blue sweatpants. With crêpe paper of different shades of blue, I cut long strips, measuring from the shoulder to the waist and from the waist to cover the shoes, 3 cm wide. Then I glued them with white glue on the flannel at the shoulders and neck at the front and back and on the pants at the waist also at the front and back. That took me some time. I put a lot of strips on it so that it would move when she walked and look like water in a liquid state.

When my daughter wore it around the house, she and I liked it. It looked cute, the different colored strips moving. But I didn't take into account one very important factor: that she had to parade through the streets and that the strips were a bit long and reached the ground.

On Friday I took her to school and there it was all activity. The teacher came up to me and looked at the costume.

"How well it looks on you, Mrs. Morela! It is very original"

"Thank you!, they are all very nice! I would like to join you, but I have to work"

I liked to participate in school activities and usually did, but this time I would miss it, I couldn't miss work.

I left my daughter there with her teacher and her little friends dressed up as trees, sun, fairy, flowers, butterflies and different animals. They looked very cute and cheerful.

After noon, after I got off work, I went to school and arrived a little after dismissal time. The students whose parents could not pick them up at that time are left to play in the central courtyard in the care of the principal and assistant principal.

I went to the playground and found my daughter sitting on a bench, looking upset, and the second thing I saw was the state the costume was in.

Most of the straps were torn and there were only the pieces left attached to the flannel and pants.

My daughter came running up to me. Her face was covered with a mixture of sweat and dirt and her long black hair, which she had tied in two buns, was loose and disheveled.

"Hello, daughter, how was the parade?"

I looked at her, smiling.

She had a habit of saying what she felt no matter who was listening, and next to me was the headmistress.

"Oh, Mommy! This costume was a disaster," she grimaced, twisting her mouth. "As we paraded through the streets, children stepped on my strips and ripped them off with her water disguise. I was trying hard not to let them do it, but they weren't careful"

I kept looking at her annoyed little face and listening to her complaints.

"I spent the whole time trying to make sure they didn't tear my strips off. Besides, the sun made me sweat and my neck and arms started to itch, and I couldn't stand it and I had to scratch it. It still itches"

I checked her and her tan skin looked red from the irritation.

I said, "Daughter, it really was a disaster. When we get home, you take a bath, and I'll apply a cream, and you'll see that you'll be relieved. But well daughter!, the important thing is that you were in the parade, and they gave you candy, and you enjoyed it". I tried to look for the good side.

But she was very sincere, as most children are when they express what they feel.

"No, Mommy!, I didn't enjoy it! I didn't want to walk around in the costume anymore".

I had to agree, the costume was a recipe for disaster, my creativity did not take into consideration several factors, first what could happen with the strips of paper, which were easily torn and itchy, secondly that it was a group of small children and thirdly the walk in the sun.

It was really an idea that did not fit the circumstances, and although I felt responsible that my daughter did not enjoy her school activity, we laughed a lot while she told her dad and brother what had happened to her water costume, now in a better mood and with a better skin itch. I then felt calm because she had done it with motherly love and I think that excuses everything.

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El disfraz de agua


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El día martes, víspera de carnaval, llegué a la escuela a buscar a Maxi, mi pequeña hija de seis años. Ella estudiaba en un colegio grande que estaba ubicado en la población de El Limón, muy cerca de las montañas y con un clima fresco, a diferencia del calor agobiante que hace en Maracay.

La primaria funcionaba en un área separada del preescolar y de la secundaria. Allí estaban los salones y un parque donde los niños jugaban en el recreo.

La maestra, una señora morena con el cabello rizado y con una sonrisa en su rostro, un poco cansado por haber atendido a los niños en su salón de primer grado, se acercó a saludarme y a darme una información.

—¡Hola, Sra. Morela!, la próxima semana es lunes y martes de carnaval. Como ya usted sabe, no hay actividades escolares y, como es tradición en la escuela, queremos hacer este día viernes un desfile de comparsas con todos los alumnos de la escuela. Vamos a desfilar por las calles de El Limón. A nuestro primer grado le tocó como tema: la naturaleza.

Yo la interrumpí en ese momento.

—Me encanta ese tema. Muy importante para concientizar a los niños.

—¡Así es!. Bueno, cómo le venía diciendo. Las otras maestras y yo hemos seleccionado varios disfraces y a su hija le asignamos el de agua.

Yo dentro de mí pensé. Las maestras se ponen muy creativas en estos casos... un disfraz de agua

—¿Qué le parece? ¿Puede hacerlo?

—Me parece muy bien. ¡Por supuesto que puedo¡ ya pensaré cómo hacerlo.

Me fui con mi hija mientras me imaginaba cómo iba a hacer el disfraz de agua. Tenía mucho trabajo en esta semana y mi mente estaba tratando de ver cómo iba a cumplir con este compromiso con mi hija y la escuela.

Pero una vez que llegué a la casa, yo también me puse creativa y me animé para hacer el diseño. Quería que fuera algo diferente.

El agua es un elemento que está en movimiento, y aunque es incoloro, en los mares se ve azul y es el color que la representa. Con estas dos características me dispuse a elaborar el disfraz.

Le compré a mi hija una franela y un pantalón deportivo de color azul claro. Con papel crepé de diferentes tonos de azul, corte tiras largas, a la medida desde el hombro hasta la cintura y desde la cintura hasta cubrir los zapatos, de 3 cm de ancho. Luego las pegué con pega blanca en la franela a nivel de los hombros y el cuello por delante y por detrás y en el pantalón a nivel de la cintura también por delante y por detrás. Eso me llevó algún tiempo. Le puse muchas tiras para que se movieran cuando caminara y pareciera agua en estado líquido.

Cuando mi hija se lo puso en la casa, a ella y a mí nos gustó. Se veían lindas las tiras de diferentes colores moviéndose. Pero no tomé en cuenta un factor muy importante: que ella tenía que desfilar por las calles y que las tiras estaban un poco largas y llegaban al suelo.

El viernes la llevé a la escuela y allí todo era actividad. La maestra se me acercó y miró el disfraz.

—¡Qué bien le quedó Sra. Morela! Está muy original.

—¡Gracias!, ¡todos están muy lindos! Me gustaría acompañarlos, pero tengo que trabajar.

Me gustaba participar en las actividades escolares y generalmente lo hacía, pero esta vez me lo perdería, no podía faltar al trabajo.

Dejé a mi hija allí con su maestra y sus amiguitos disfrazados de árboles, sol, hada, flores, mariposas y diferentes animales. Se veian muy lindos y alegres.

Después del mediodía, luego de salir del trabajo, me fui a la escuela y llegué un poco después de la hora de salida. Los alumnos cuyos padres no podían buscarlos a esa hora se quedan jugando en el patio central al cuidado de la directora y de la subdirectora.

Me fui al patio y encontré a mi hija sentada en un banco, con cara de disgusto, y lo segundo que vi fue el estado en que estaba el disfraz.

La mayoría de las tiras estaban rotas y quedaban solo los trozos pegados a la franela y al pantalón.

Mi hija se me acercó corriendo. Su cara estaba llena de una mezcla de sudor y tierra y el cabello negro y largo, que se lo había sujetado en dos moños, estaba suelto y alborotado.

—¡Hola, hija!, ¿cómo estuvo el desfile?

La miré sonriendo.

Ella tenía la costumbre de decir lo que sentía sin importar quién estaba escuchando y a mi lado estaba la directora.

—¡Ay, mami! Este disfraz fue un desastre.—Hizo una mueca torciendo la boca. — Mientras desfilábamos por las calles, los niños me pisaban las tiras y me las arrancaban. Yo estaba brava tratando de que no lo hicieran, pero ellos no tenían cuidado. Me pasé todo el tiempo pendiente de que no me arrancaran las tiras. Además, el sol me hacía sudar y me empezó a picar el cuello y los brazos y no aguantaba y me tuve que rascar. Todavía me pica.

La revisé y su piel morena se veía roja de la irritación.

—Hija, realmente fue un desastre. Cuando lleguemos a la casa, te bañas y te aplico una cremita, ya vas a ver que se te aliviara. Pero bueno, hija, lo importante es que estuviste en la comparsa y les dieron dulces y lo disfrutaste.

Yo tratando de buscar el lado bueno. Pero ella fue muy sincera, como son la mayoría de los niños que expresan lo que sienten.

—¡No, mami, yo no lo disfruté! No quería caminar más con el disfraz.

Le tuve que dar la razón, el disfraz fue una receta para el desastre, mi creatividad no tomo en consideración varios factores, primero lo que podía ocurrir con las tiras de papel, que se rompían fácilmente y producían picazón, segundo que era una comparsa de niños pequeños y tercero la caminata bajo el sol.

Fue realmente una idea nada adecuada a las circunstancias y aunque me senti responsable de que mi hija no disfrutara de su actividad escolar, luego nos reímos mucho mientras ella ya con mejor humor y mejor de la picazón le contaba a su papá y a su hermano lo que había ocurrido con su disfraz de agua. Yo entonces me senti tranquila porque ademas lo habia hecho con amor de madre y eso creo que lo disculpa todo.

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Oh, so sad she had her costume torn. I can imagine her face when she was describing how bad it was to you.
Nice read.

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Hello @marriot5464
I'm glad you liked my story. My daughter still remembers that moment.
Thank you very much for your comment.

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Children can be so opinionated and adults need to learn how best to navigate their feelings. I felt the frustration for her. But kudos to Mom for putting in all that work. The love wins in the end always.

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Hello @kei2.
Thank you very much for your comment, it is very true what you say.

Greetings and happy night ✨️

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Wow. What’s nice read here. I felt for her too and I must say I love the way she expressed her feelings about the parade. Children will always be children and you really tried your best as a parent. It will be one of her most memorable events and experiences she will never forget.

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Thank you very much @abdul-qudus. I'm glad for your comment.
Indeed, after so many years she remembers that moment in detail.
Regards

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This was one captivating story wow. Trying to picture the look on her face as she explained.

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Hello @offia66
I appreciate your comment. Hahaha she really was very upset and still remembers that moment.
Regards 🌻

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Children want perfection. If anything goes the way they didn't expect, they become highly emotional. One good thing is that they don't pretend nor hide their feelings. Like you told her, the positive part is that she participated in the parade and the memory will remain with her.

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That's right, children are characterized by being spontaneous and sincere. And she just said what she felt at that moment and that's fine.
Thank you very much @lightpen for your kind comment 🤗

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Sometimes ideas in our head should just be left alone lol.

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Hello @bipolar95
Your comment made me laugh and it is very true what you say, I let myself get carried away by imagination without analyzing the consequences.

Thank you very much and have a nice night ✨️

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I have had my own fair share so I can relate 😂

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