Love to see you pouring out positive vibes into the communities @aowilson
You attempted a high range, it was a bit stressing but you took it to the end. I'll suggest you try lower range also, maybe you'll not have to dispense so much energy to accomplish your target sound..
Don't forget every community have their own rules and regulations you'll need to abide by.
One of the rules for Hive music festival is that your words count be more than 300 words excluding the lyrics.
Your entry should fall between Mondays to Saturdays.