Still In Thoughts...

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I woke up and still say I Love You
But now there's no reply right now in sight
I always feel your presence with me every time
As if you never left my side for a single moment

I remember your comforting voice too, always
Now there's not a sound, not even a single beat
I am left with only echoes from the past
As it follows me around from time to time

You're always with me, by my side, with thoughts but I can't hold your hands
I hold you in my mind and my imagination brings you to life
The reason why God took you is still a mystery
I find hard to understand but I am not ready to contest

Summer days seem much shorter in retrospect
Dark nights just linger on and I can't find any suspect
Dreams of long ago suddenly turned into nightmares
As expected when your loved one is nowhere in sight again

As the popular saying goes that real love never fades
Out of mind isn't out of sight as it burns like the scorching sun
Although it might be distant - far away from touch never too far away from feel
The thoughts and memories goes on as Celine Dion's heart goes on too

Her thoughts, memories and the spirit will never die
It shines brighter than the diamond, reflect better than the stars in the sky
To our lost loved ones, we know they are far from sight
But forever in our hearts they are living - a permanent abode


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Thank you for your time.


My pen doesn't bleed, it speaks, with speed and ease.

Still me,

My tongue is like the pen of a ready writer.

Olawalium; (Love's chemical content, in human form). Take a dose today: doctor's order.



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It's hurt so much not to lose someone we love, love is as strong as death is.

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It hurts so much and it hits harder. There are no words to describe the hurt and the vacuum they leave behind.

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No doubt, it's always harder. Words fail us sometimes when we want to articulate the feelings.

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Absolutely no doubt. It's as strong as death and too hard sometimes to bear especially with so much memories that keeps playing in one's head.

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This resonated with me so much I had to boost this. Your words are real. Losing a loved one is hard. We can never get them over our thoughts. We have them with us. They live with us and we carry them in our hearts everywhere we go.

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We have them with us and we carry them in our thoughts everywhere we go. It's hard to deal with and everyone adapts the best way they can.

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It is hard to let go the bond we share with them and carrying around the beautiful memories we had we them is a good thing to do.

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This poem is so solemn with a very comforting message for our weary hearts. You know, I'm really so grateful to good for giving us the opportunity to make memories because with it you are never lost.

Thank you so much for this beautiful reminder that we are never apart from our loved ones 🥰

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With the memories we are never lost and that's the truth. That's what keeps us closer to those people we hold dear that we have lost.

Thank you so much.

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Yeah, they remain forever in our memories and heart.

You are always welcome!

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Very nice poem friend, it is very thoughtful it made me think many things, because sometimes even if we do not want to let go for the good of both, love is what moves the world and while those people are in our mind and heart, they are not completely gone from our life, for something God puts them in our way at some point in our lives, great writing as always bro, hug ♥

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They are not completely gone, that's truth and I am always thankful for the memories I have created with those people while they were alive. I wish for more but I would gladly take the memories we have created over not having any.

Thank you so much.

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Exactly especially the beautiful moments, those that are in a special trunk in our mind and being, where the ones we wish would last a lifetime, those moments where life is worth living, thanks to you my friend for sharing this beautiful piece ♥

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I don't know what to say ... I may never understand the hurt but I know its never easy to lose someone.

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It's never easy. Knowing they are gone away from sight and the best we can come close to them would be to replay the memories we have created together makes it tough but in a way, bearable...knowing they are not lost forever.

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You are right, whenever I think of my parents getting old someday makes me cry and I really wish death wouldn't separate us someday which is inevitable.

It can be very painful.

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Losing someone we love is a hard thing to experience. But though they are gone, their memories never fade.

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Their memories can never fade as long as we keep them in our thoughts. Sometimes we see situations and even things that reminds us of them.

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Losing people we care about can hurt so much but some things are just beyond our control and death is just one of those things.

I find this poem very comforting and this is why I courage the fact that we make beautiful moments and memories while we are in the world because when we are long gone, these things will bring peace, happiness and comfort to those we leave behind.

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Death is beyond our control and we have little impact on it. It would definitely rattle us based on our closeness to that person. It's tough.

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It's always tough. So many unspoken words makes it even harder. Life is simple and we should make the most of it.

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Thank you so much, brother. I'm glad you enjoyed this. Indeed, it's about creating as many memories as we can because there are some things beyond our control but those within our reach, we should make the most of it.

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How sad and yet comforting your words are. This surely did make my heart goes on like Celine Dion's and makes me breathless like Shayne Ward.

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The pains still lingers on but what to do? we just have to live with the memories .

It's really painful to lose a loved one. I love your poetry.

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Your pen really doesn't bleed but my clothes are soaked from what is produced.
That was an emotional piece and still a great piece
Thanks for sharing

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You are not alone in your thought. Death is inevitable. We pray God gives us the heart to bear the loss of our lives ones. Words are not enough to express how we feel inside when we lose our dear ones. Take heart dear

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A heartfelt ode to love and loss. It's strange how time distorts through grief. Perhaps a necessary occurrence to protect us and see us through. A purposeful extended time of quiet and reflection. A poignant poem, Ola! !LUV !PIZZA
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