Fiction: The surprise of Liam/ La sorpresa de Liam (ENG/ ESP)


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Among mom's things, there's a child hiding

While Liam's mother was getting ready to leave, she lowered Liam to the carpeted floor to play with the ball and stuffed animals. But when Liam was free from his mother's arms and looked at the floor, he looked at the colorful ball and the brown bear with disinterest and preferred to crawl quickly to the other corner where his childish eyes could see more interesting things.

On the way he found a blue cloth shoe and when he was about to put it in his mouth, the mother jumped up to where he was and immediately took it out of his hands:

"Why are you putting that in your mouth, Liam, that's dirty!" -said the mother and threw the shoe away from the child, to a corner of the room; then she took the brown stuffed animal and brought it to the child.

"Here, play with this!" -he ordered and continued grooming himself.

Liam looked at the still bear, then touched with his little fingers one of the eyes of the stuffed animal, making small circles and pressing hard. He stayed like that for a few seconds, while a trickle of drool came out of his mouth and fell on the toy's face; afterwards he took the bear's ear and bit it. He lingered for a while, feeling the tickle on the toothless gums, but then he let go of the stuffed animal and continued crawling around the room looking for something different. The mother's eyes watched him from high above, attentive, like a lighthouse shines on a ship sailing slowly over the waves.


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Suddenly, in the middle of exploring the room, Liam stopped with his eyes wide open. His surprised face, it looked like fright. He sat bolt upright and his little body shuddered with wonder as he stared at what he had found. He sat still for a while, not knowing what to do, then he turned to look at his mother's face, who did not make the slightest movement to take him away from it, and then he turned his little eyes towards what he had discovered. Her amazed look, with her eyes like two round plates, was the spitting image of astonishment.

Paralyzed for a brief moment, Liam stretched out his chubby little hands that moved in the air trying to catch what was in front of his eyes, but it was impossible: a smooth sheet prevented him from doing so. His little hands scratched the surface without being able to grasp what was in front of him.

Then Liam started to make sounds and jumped with fright when the other one also started to make sounds. He was going to start crying, but he saw that the other one also wrinkled his face as if he was going to cry too; then Liam stared at him and became mute. The other one in front of him also became mute.


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Thus static, absorbed in what he saw, the child remained for a while, disinterested in everything else around him. Suddenly, with his hands on each side of his head, Liam glued himself to the surface and on the other side, the other one did the same. Liam glued his mouth to the other mouth and it made him laugh. As if talking to himself and laughing to himself, Liam started laughing and mumbling some words stuck to the smooth and shiny surface. After a while, tired, Liam peeled his mouth off the slime-filled sheet and began to move his head from side to side and with his eyes wide open, he said:

"¡¡Ah, ah, ah, ah!!" -as if it were a game between children.

From where she stood, the mother looked tenderly at Liam who had forgotten his surroundings and was enraptured looking at himself in the mirror.

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Thank you for reading and commenting. Until a future reading, friends

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La sorpresa de Liam
Mientras la madre de Liam se arreglaba para salir, bajó al niño al piso alfombrado para que jugara con la pelota y los peluches. Pero cuando Liam estuvo liberado de los brazos de su madre y se miró en el piso, miró la pelota de colores y el oso marrón con desinterés y prefirió gatear rápidamente hasta la otra esquina donde los ojos infantiles veían cosas más interesantes.
En el camino encontró un zapato de tela azul y cuando ya se lo iba a llevar a la boca, la madre saltó hasta donde estaba él y se lo quitó inmediatamente de las manos:
_¿Por qué te vas a llevar eso a la boca, Liam? ¡Eso está sucio! –dijo la madre y tiró el zapato lejos del niño, a un rincón de la habitación; seguidamente tomó el peluche marrón y se lo acercó al niño.
_ ¡Toma! ¡Juega con esto! –le ordenó y siguió arreglándose.
Liam miró el oso inmóvil, luego tocó con sus dedos pequeños uno de los ojos del peluche, haciendo pequeños círculos y presionando fuerte. Así estuvo unos segundos, mientras un hilillo de baba salía de su boca y caía sobre el rostro del juguete; posteriormente tomó la oreja del oso y la mordió. Se entretuvo un rato sintiendo el cosquilleo en las encías sin dientes, pero luego soltó el peluche y siguió gateando por todo el espacio de la habitación buscando algo diferente. Los ojos de la madre lo miraban desde la altura, atentos, como un faro alumbra el barco que navega lentamente sobre las olas.
De repente, en plena exploración de la habitación, Liam se detuvo con los ojos bien abiertos. Su cara de sorpresa, parecía de susto. Se sentó de frente y su pequeño cuerpo se estremeció con extrañeza al mirar fijamente lo que había encontrado. Así estuvo un rato, quieto, sin saber qué hacer, luego volteó a ver la cara de su madre que no hizo el menor movimiento para alejarlo de aquello y después volvió sus ojitos hacia lo que había descubierto. Su mirada maravillada, con sus ojitos como dos platos redondos, era la viva imagen del asombro.
Paralizado por un breve instante, Liam extendió sus manitas regordetas que se movieron en el aire intentando atrapar lo que estaba frente a sus ojos, pero fue imposible: una lámina lisa se lo impedía. Sus manitas arañaban la superficie sin poder asir lo que estaba frente a él.
Después Liam comenzó a emitir sonidos y saltó del susto cuando el otro comenzó también a emitir sonidos. Se iba a poner a llorar, pero vio que el otro también arrugaba la cara como si fuera a llorar también; entonces Liam lo miró fijamente y se quedó mudo. El otro frente a él también quedó mudo.
Así estático, absorto en lo que veía, permaneció el niño por un rato, desinteresando en todo lo demás que lo rodeaba. Súbitamente, con las manos a cada lado, sobre la cabeza, Liam se pegó a la superficie y del otro lado, el otro también hizo lo mismo. Liam pegó su boca a la otra boca y aquello lo hizo reír. Como si hablara solo y se riera solo, Liam comenzó a reír y balbucear algunas palabras pegado a la superficie lisa y brillante. Al rato, cansado, Liam despegó su boca de la lámina llena de baba y comenzó a mover la cabeza de un lado a otro y con los ojos bien abiertos, decía:
_Ah, ah, ah –como si se tratase de un juego entre niños.
Desde donde estaba, la madre miraba con ternura a Liam que se había olvidado del entorno y estaba embelesado mirándose en el espejo.






















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Reading this made me smile because I can really imagine how cute Liam looks as he peeks at himself in the mirror. I was really curious at first about what made him surprised like that, and when I realized it was just his reflection he's playing with, I laughed. Toddlers are really cute and innocent creatures, and I can't really help myself admiring their wholesomeness.

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I believe that the innocence of a child is the most transparent thing there is, it is genuine. Greetings

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I really enjoyed this story, which was also very tender. Babies are so innocent, that is the stage of discovering a world they have just awakened to.

Thanks for sharing your story.
Excellent day.

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Amazement in children is a daily occurrence! Each new thing, for them, is a world that opens up before their eyes. Thanks for your comment, my friend. Good day to you

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