Secret room in Mother's House
5 Years later he went home and in those 5 years, everything from his house had changed. The next day his friend came to meet him.
"How are you, Haider? We met after a long time. Can't imagine how much I've missed you all these years. Now why are you standing outside? Come inside. What would happen if the house changed? The people are the same. It is the same mother's house who scolded us both a lot and loved us a lot." Jamal said everything in his breath.
"Yes, yes, I remember everything. You were gone, so what would I have done without you? Well, where is Amma Ji?" Haider hugs Jamal.
"I am here, son. Why are you standing outside? Come in. Jamal, come, son, eat first, then keep talking." Amma Ji said while greeting Haider.
They were free after eating. Jamal was showing his whole house to Haider. While looking at the house, they stand in front of a closed room.
"Why is this room locked? Where is the key?" Jamal asked his mother.
"Yes, Jamal, there is there something special in this room, which is a closed room." Haider delayed Jamal's speech.
"Nothing, son, this is the storeroom. There is nothing for you guys to do here. Well, you guys, now talk, I am praying." Amma Ji said while avoiding the matter.
Well, those people left after talking, but the same room was still beating in Jamal's heart. What happened in this room? And there Haider was also chewing on the same thing. And both made a plan to open this room on the phone. The next day Haider again came to Jamal.
"Haider, you don't think Amma Ji is getting anything. We must see what is happening in this room." Jamal said in surprise.
"Yes, Jamal, by the way, this is a domestic matter for you guys. But you know how interested I am in knowing the secrets." Haider said with a smile.
Both of them are called Amma ji.
"Amma ji, give us the key to this room, we want to see it. We have seen the whole house, that's all that is left." Jamal said while asking about keys.
"Son, I said that there is nothing but garbage here. There is nothing for you people to do here." Amma ji said and went away.
"Haider, I think there must be something in this room that Amma doesn't want to show us. But I will continue to see this too." Jamal added interest.
"Yes, you are right. Let's do one thing. I am careful that no one goes and you look under the door. Maybe you will see something." Haider said while giving advice.
"You have done the right thing with your mind. It is necessary to do the work carefully." Jamal said while bowing down.
When Jamal looked down from the door, he was surprised.
"Yes, Jamal you saw it, tell me what it is." Haider asked anxiously. "Haider Amma ji was saying that this is a store room, but this room is very clean and a bed is also laid here. Jamal said in surprise. If this room is completely clean, why did Aman Ji forbid opening it?" Haider said while patting his forehead.
"Do one thing. At four o'clock Amma Ji goes to the park for a walk. We will break the lock at that time." Jamal said while giving the advice.
"If you say yes, then you have been fine, but it is not good to break the lock like this. You have no other solution." Haider said scratching his head.
"Maybe you forgot this is my house. And if Amma ji is not giving the keys, then there is no other solution. You don't push your little mind too much and come into the launch before Amma Ji gets suspicious." Jamal said mockingly.
They both sat in the launch and waited for Amma Ji to leave. When Amanji went for a walk, they reached in front of this closed room with an iron rod.
"This time I will keep an eye and you will break this lock." Jamal said holding the stick to Haider.
"I look like a thief to you who will break this lock. It will not work with me. You will do it yourself." Haider said while returning the baton.
"Yes, yes, I am the thief, I am the one who breaks it. Now keep your eyes open, if we are caught, we will be scolded a lot." Jamal said while breaking the lock.
After a few attempts the lock broke and they opened the door. And when the door opened they were surprised.
"Jamal, this room is very clean and tidy. And I don't see anything special here. Then Amma ji was calling it the store room and forbade me to open it. My mind is not working." Haider said while his eyes were running here and there.
"Something must happen. Let's find it." Saying this, Jamal started looking around.
After 10 minutes of searching, Jamal stood in one place.
"I didn't find anything so surprising in this room. Both our doubt and our efforts are wasted. Let's go back." Jamal said taking a deep breath.
"Yes, I feel the same way, the carpet you are standing on is very cute. It seems Amma ji has saved all the lovely things from you and kept them here, don't spoil them." Haider said teasingly.
"I am not a small child. I am already 22 years old. Dude, let's go." After saying this, Jamal was about to go outside, but he suddenly stopped.
"Wait a minute, this land is made of stone, why is this place hollow?" Jamal stopped Haider and said. "What do you mean hollow?" Haider replied.
"Hold on, pick up the carpet with me." Jamal said while bowing on the ground.
When the carpet was lifted, his eyes widened. There was a basement here.
"See, I did not say that there is something in this room. Come, open the door of the basement with me." Jamal said while attracting Haider.
After saying this, both of them opened the door and entered the basement.
"Hey Jamal, look at your childhood toys. Look at your little clothes. But what are they all doing here?"
Haider said in surprise Yes Haider how is all this?
"Hey, look at the bat that broke in childhood and you left it here. That too is still lying there. All my childhood stuff is safe and sound." Jamal said while picking up his childhood clothes.
"But what to keep all these things collected like this? All this is useless stuff. It is of no use to us, so why has Amma ji taken care of it yet?" Haider ate worriedly.
"Only Amaji can answer this now. Or why have they still managed this stuff? And if it has been kept, why has it been hidden from us?" Jamal said taking a long breath. "Yes, let's go out now."
After saying this, they both left the room when Ammaji also came in front of them.
"You both are very stupid, even though I forbade you, you guys still opened the door. Yes, you found something here? Now happy that it was an empty room, nothing else." Amma ji said locking the door.
"Yes, I saw the empty room and its basement too." Jamal said with a smile.
"Which basement?" Amma ji said looking away.
"The same basement, Amma Ji, inside which Jamal's childhood belongings were kept." Haider said sarcastically.
"Oh, you have seen everything." Amma Ji said as he placed his wand on the ground.
"Yes, those are there, but I don't understand whether they will pay for all these items. I have grown up and these things are not of my use now." Jamal said in a questioning manner.
"Yes, you have grown up, but I grew up like the old one. This way when your baby is born, I will show him all these things. And hiding this stuff from you guys, I knew that you guys would either throw it all away or leave it unusable." Amma Ji pulled Jamal's ear and said.
"Oh Amma ji? If you tell us, what should we have rejected from you? And I will not marry. I will serve you all my life." Jamal said shyly.
"Stop you crazy boy. Everyone has to get married one day. Now look at Haider, Masha'Allah he has become the father of a child. Well, if all the questions and answers are over, go for dinner, I am very hungry." Amma ji said smiling.
"Yes, you are right. I'm sure my mother would have done the same if she were alive. But you know my mother left me when I was a child." Haider said in a depressed manner.
"I will beat you stupid. How many times have I said that my mother is your mother? Now if you repeat this nonsense, I will break my mouth." Jamal said angrily.
"Yes, son. Jamal says exactly right, I am also your mother, am I not?" Ama said lovingly to Haider and will leave.
After all these incidents, those people sat down for dinner.
How time flies.
Even I get curious when I sense a room is locked and the content is being hidden. My curiosity is immediately aroused and the search begins.
Hehehe. Every body wants to know what is behind the door
if a room in my house is locked, I'll definitely be curious as to why, you can't blame the two boys. Ama is indeed a good mother who cares, and thinks about the future.
Your story is interesting, @moaz-sabir, and it becomes very suspenseful when the boys break into the room. Those are some things you did well. We have some feedback to help you on your writing journey. It is important to carefully read and edit your stories before posting to find an fix errors. Please see our article titled Help for the Grammatically Challenged in our catalog of fiction writing tips to learn more about this.
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Amma Ji was the correct one
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