The Forest - The Ink Well Fiction Prompt #114

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In the center of the thickest Cave, where sunlight cannot make way into. There stood a big crystal, the gemstone shone, reflecting different colors in all directions. It was a mystery that left everyone with unanswered questions.

Year after year, many visit the forest. Some believed the crystal can reveal things to them. One day, a young girl named Kuza had followed her mother to the forest in search of medicinal herbs. This crystal had always been a surprise to her.


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Her obsession grew, so she decided to go in alone. The forest was scarring but she was determined. She passed many creatures, getting to the crystal were terrifying creatures guarding it. Her hands were trembling but she was courageous and smart. After defending herself from the creatures, she entered the heart of the forest.

As she approached the crystal, she placed her hands on it. She went into trance and began seeing visions. She saw the beauty of the forest, the beauty of life and the Crystal's enigmatic power.

Her encounter was life changing as she felt powerful in her life. She discovered the hidden beauty that can be encountered in the thickest heart of the forest.

                    THE END

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Kuza was brave to go inside that cave.
I wish you written more about her adventures with the crystal.

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Thanks for your beautiful comment. Time constraint was a delimiting factor.

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True

The valuables are found in things that are despised or unvalued.

Thank you for this piece

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Thanks so much for your beautiful comment and for taking time to read and comment on my work.

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Thanks so much for the warm remainder. I will surely look into them again.

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