Mikka's Journey -| The Ink Well Fiction Prompt 130

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In a small city lived a spirited young lady named Mikka. Renowned for her industrious nature and her unyielding pursuit of independence, she managed a mini grocery store that supplied all essentials to the neighborhood. Her story was heard throughout the city, motivating young women who aspired to be independent while keeping their hearts open to true love. Mikka, who cherished her singleness, dreamed of a love that would complement her independence.

Then enters John to the small city. A man whose life is in the city is unknown, his aura of affluence blinded anyone to question him or his hometown, John's mysterious wealth intrigued confusion as all the ladies wanted to be noticed by him but his eyes were fixed solely on Mikka after hearing so much about her hard work. Her charming smile, and ability to stand on her own ignited a longing in him that he couldn't ignore.

Their paths crossed when John, intentionally, strolled into Mikka's shop to make a purchase. It was the spark that ignited their connection. He admired her from a distance, while she felt an unfamiliar flutter in her heart. Love's sweetness, something she had pondered in her solitude, was beginning to happen in reality.

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Ending number one:
Their affection shone as they surfed the waters of romance. Everyone admired the two lovebirds together; Mikka's self-assuredness and John's charm seemed they were destined for each other. He proposed that she joins him to his hometown to meet his family. Upon reaching the new city, Mikka found herself in what looked like a hotel.

"This doesn't look like a family house," Mikka said.

"Yes, babe, this is one of my hotels. Let's have fun here, then we can go meet my parents."

Mikka was comfortable with John but refused to compromise her hard earned money on expenses even after countless pursued by John for her to foot the bills. Over time, John tried and it failed, he needed to act fast as the number of days to renew the hotel payment was fast approaching , knowing fully well he was resting under the umbrella of fake life. He left her in the hotel room and that was the last sight of John.

"Good morning babe, where has he gone so early?"

She left the hotel room and began in search of John. Made all the inquiries she could make and at last she got a positive response from the cleaner who told her she saw when John left the hotel.

"Thanks, I will just go give him a call"

Getting to the room, she found out her phone was no more, her purse that contained all her vital belongings had been taken away by John.

The only way to get to her city was to go to the bank and make a withdrawal and get a new ATM card. Getting to the bank, her account was empty, funds transferred to an unknown account with no BVN. Mikka realized she had been duped left her stranded as it dawned on her that she had encountered a fraudster as boyfriend.

She regretted using finger print authorization as the only security method to unlocking her phone. she pick her pieced together and persevered with renewed determination. She managed to sought money to return to her city.

Ending number two:

After some months, John returned apologizing to Mikka for forgiveness and second chance to right his wrongs. She forgave him but refused granting him a second chance instead fiercely held onto her business. One day in Warehouse, she met Hanson, a kind hearted man who respected her values. As friends, they shared stories of past stories, drawing them closer. Mikka's heart began to soften for Hanson. After all, they both understood the pains of finding true love. Recognizing Hanson's equal footing in the journey of love, Mikka took a leap of faith. Their connection grew stronger, waxing on mutual respect and understanding. Hanson loved her independence and supported her business, allowing her to strive without losing herself. At last, they celebrated a love that didn't compromise, but one that complemented Mikka's cherished self-worth and Independence.



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What a bad occurrence to Mikka from John.
John appeared to be "all that glitters" which ended with "is not good".

It's good Mikka found back her heart well cherished by someone better

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Very true. Not all that glisters are indeed gold.

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The poor girl suffered a terrible betrayal, but in the end she found her true love. an entertaining story

Thanks for sharing.
Good day.

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It indeed a new and beautiful beginning after an undeserved pain at the hands of John.

Thanks so much for your kind words and the time you invested in reading till the end.

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John was not the best match for her as his is a cheat. It's even fine he did not withdraw all her money from the bank.

Trusting another guy was not a mistake to her since she has found time to study him.

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Pardon my late response, this few days had been choked up for me.

I do agree with you. It's very necessary to take enough time to understand and trust someone before fully committing to a relationship. Mikka did that with John but John wasn't just meant for her.

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Glad Mikka eventually enjoyed true love from Hanson.

It's wise to seek the partner's background before committing much to an affair.

Thank you for sharing

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So sorry for delayed response. Mikka was lucky.

It's wise to seek the partner's background before committing much to an affair.

No matter how deep the love, this is number one. Background matters in a relationship in order not to be walking blindly in love

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When a story seems to come to an end it is always possible for something else to happen that changes events. Mikka had the sensible determination not to accept juan and in the place of her intimate desires she was able to save a space for a respectful and supportive love to arrive. Thank you for participating in this fiction challenge with two different endings, @marynn .

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You are right. Thanks so much.

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Nice story.

To me, mikka made the right choice by not giving John a second chance because he doesn’t deserve it. I’m glad she found Hanson that actually deserves her.

Nice endings

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Considering his dishonesty, she indeed made the right choice by not giving him a second chance.

Thanks dear for stopping by and pardon my late reply.

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Thanks 😊.

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Mikka was so unlucky to cross paths with John. It is unthinkable for John to come back to seek forgiveness and second chance. I don't think anyone can agree to such plea. Thank you for sharing the story with us.

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Indeed, sometimes in life, we come across people like the character of John who don't always have our best interests at heart.

I'm glad you found the story engaging.

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Being in a relationship with someone whom you're not even sure of can be problematic. I feel sorry for Mikka for meeting John. I have experienced betrayal, too, and the pain is unbearable.

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Indeed, pain of betrayal comes with another pain. I have been betrayed too and I agree with you, it's unbearable.

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That was betrayal of the highest order. I’m glad she eventually found an easy love with Hanson.

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