The unexpected ⏳ [EN|ES] // Lo inesperado - The Ink Well Prompt #63
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Written in Spanish and translated to English with
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(Spanish version below)
-Hi George!
-Miss Andrew, what a pleasure to see you here again!
-Thank you so much George, every time I come to town I can't help but come to Le Château du Lac, I wouldn't forgive myself.
-We are always delighted to have you back Miss Andrew. Black coffee without sugar and Crêpes Suzette flambéed with Grand Marnier?
-Always so attentive George, as always, you know me so well! Ann said as she gave a huge, warm smile and turned her eyes towards the path that led to a huge lake, which shone like a mirror under the sun's rays.
-You know George, when I come to this place I feel as if time stands still, the good, the bad, the complicated or happy I may be, it just stands back, as if suspended in time. Excuse me, George, I don't know what I'm saying. Ann said as she sighed.
-I know perfectly well what you mean, Miss Ann.
-Really, George?
-Of course, Miss Andrew. I came to this place twenty-five years ago. Well, the truth is, it would be just eleven days from today. But I would only be in town for a few weeks. The people here are charming and hospitable, the food is delicious and the architecture is dreamy. But it was enough that I got to know this part of the city, this lake, for me to understand what love really is.
-I didn't know that, George, but tell me more. Said Ann, who reached out to touch George's hand.
-Excuse me, Miss Andrew, let me take your order and I'll be right back.
-Of course, my dear George.
Ann's gaze again wandered along the sidewalk, surrounded by low boxwood hedges and beautiful yellow and pink tulips delicately planted in the most perfect places. The breeze ruffled her beautiful hair, as it carried to her senses the exquisite fragrances of the delicious desserts that could be found in that place.
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She closed her eyes and let herself be caressed by that delicate breeze. That terrace was perfect. Certainly, there was luxury in that place, its silk tablecloths that dressed those elegant Louis XV style tables with that exquisite golden patina that matched the comfortable chairs and those beautiful and huge bouquets of exquisite flowers that adorned each of the tables, made the atmosphere unparalleled.
But she didn't care about luxury, even though her life was surrounded by it. Time after time she returned to that place, no matter how far it was from the hotel where she always stayed.
-Miss Andrew, Miss Andrew. George said repeatedly in his polite, calm voice.
-Sorry George, for a moment I got carried away by the magnificence of the place.
-Your order will be here very soon.
-I know George, thank you very much. But tell me, you tell me you came here almost twenty five years ago, but what brought you here?
-I was 32 years old, Miss Andrew, and I was an inveterate bohemian. I had heard a lot about the city of dreams, and there was nothing to stop me from coming to see it.
-I was in every corner, in every street, in every market, I tasted all the Crêpes (she says it between laughs, while she laughs too), and only then I knew, that it was not true what they said about this place, because the truth is that no one is able to tell how wonderful and incredible it is, who knows the City of Dreams, will never be full in another place. But then, Miss Andrew, it was the turn of this side of the city and I fell madly in love. (George continued)
But a few years later, it was the true love that got me chained to this place for life. My dear Lousie. Said George emitting a great sigh.
-Oh George, is Louise your wife?
-No, Miss Andrew, we loved each other madly and passionately, but her parents objected because they said she was too young and took her away from me, but I never saw her again, and here I am. Every time I look towards that sidewalk, I see her running towards me and smiling, like when she was waiting for me to finish work and we could enjoy the sunset right there on the shore of this beautiful lake.
-Oh George, I'm so sorry, I really am!
-Don't worry Miss Andrew, in spite of that, I've had a good life and I've met some amazing people like you over the years, who have almost become family. George says this while laughing mischievously.
-My dear George, I am also grateful to have known you for quite some time now.
-Thank you Miss Andrew, I'll get your Crêpes now.
Divinely, Ann enjoyed her Crêpes along with her black coffee, as the breeze continued to brush against her cheeks, while her mind and heart were lost in the distance.
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As always, Ann was gracious, and bid George a fond farewell, thanking him for his services, but especially for his company with a generous tip.
-I'm going home tomorrow, George, so it will be a while before I'm back again.
-See you soon, Miss Andrew, may the weather be as kind to you as you are to me.
Ann and George said goodbye as had happened several times a year for the past 10 years. They each went on with their lives, just as they had been up to that point. George continued to be kind and to gladden the hearts of those who passed by Le Château du Lac, whether by chance or not. But that was the way it happened, and there were more than a few who saw in him the person they needed in their lives.
A few months later, Ann received a call from her friend Frank, who for some years had been helping Ann to find her real parents. But this time, Frank, for the first time, had important news.
-Ann
-Frank, is that you? Tell me please, tell me this time you do have good news for me.
-Ann, this time I do. I'm so excited I'm just finding out and I called you.
-Finally Ann, I know what your mother's name is, she was only 17 when she had you, but she didn't survive the birth and her parents gave you away to an orphanage. I am so sorry, Ann.
Ann was silent, for she had always hoped to find her parents alive. And after a few seconds, which seemed like an eternity, she said:
-Oh Frank, you told me it was good news, but that's so sad.
-Her name was Louise, that's all I could find out, and no one knows about your father.
Suddenly Ann's mind began to whirl, the scenes in her head flashed by as if she were accumulating the ones that were useful and discarding the ones that weren't, like putting the pieces of a puzzle together. She frowned, closed her eyes, pursed her lips, paced back and forth, but can it be possible, she repeated to herself over and over again.
A few days later, Ann found herself back in the City of Dreams, much sooner than she had even imagined she could return. Just by setting foot on the ground, she knew where she had to go. So she hurriedly grabbed a cab and headed for Le Château du Lac, where she untimely entered and looked everywhere, but couldn't find it.
-George, please, where is George?" she asked the Monsieur who was coming towards her.
-Excuse me Miss, but George is not here, you can take a seat over here and I will take your order.
-No, I'm sorry, you don't understand, I need to talk to George, where is he, where can I reach him?
There was a stony silence for a few seconds. The monsieur sighed and said to him:
-George is dead. Early Monday morning, he didn't show up for work as he usually did and in trying to locate him he was found dead in his room, I'm so sorry.
Ann's racing heart was beating faster. A feeling of sadness and despair invaded her whole body. But could it be possible, perhaps she would never know.
For sure Ann would come back, to the same place, sit on the same terrace with the same view, order her coffee, but especially the Crêpes Suzette. Surely she would, of course she would, but not as often.
SPANISH VERSION
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-Hola George!
-Señorita Andrew, que placer verla de nuevo por aquí!
-Muchas gracias George, cada vez que vengo a la ciudad no puedo dejar de venir a Le Château du Lac, no me lo perdonaría.
-Siempre estamos encantados de tenerla de vuelta Señorita Andrew. ¿Café negro sin azúcar y Crêpes Suzette flameadas con Grand Marnier?
-Siempre tan atento George, como siempre. ¡Me conoces tan bien!. Dijo Ann mientras esboza una enorme y cálida sonrisa y dirigía su vista hacia la vereda que conducía a un enorme lago, que brillaba como espejo bajo los rayos del Sol.
-Sabes George, cuando vengo a este lugar siento como si el tiempo se detuviera, lo bueno, lo malo, lo complicado o feliz que pueda estar, simplemente se queda atrás, como suspendido en el tiempo. Discúlpame, George, que no sé lo que digo. Dijo Ann mientras suspiraba.
-Sé perfectamente a lo que se refiere, Señorita Ann.
-¿Lo dices en serio George?
-Por supuesto, señorita Andrew. Yo vine a este lugar hace veinticinco años. Bueno, la verdad es que se cumpliría en apenas 11 días contados a partir de hoy. Pero solo estaría en la ciudad unas cuantas semanas. Las personas aquí son encantadoras y hospitalarias, la comida es deliciosa y la arquitectura de ensueño. Pero bastó que conociera esta parte de la ciudad, este lago, para que entendiera lo que en verdad es el amor.
-No sabía eso George, pero cuéntame más. Le dijo Ann, quien alargo su mano para tocar la de George.
-Discúlpeme, señorita Andrew, déjeme pedir su orden y volveré enseguida.
-Por supuesto, mi querido George.
La mirada de Ann nuevamente se perdió a lo largo de la vereda, rodeada de setos bajos de boj y de hermosos tulipanes amarillos y rosas sembrados delicadamente en los lugares más perfectos. La brisa hacía ondear su hermoso cabello, mientras lleva a sus sentidos las exquisitas fragancias de los deliciosos postres que se podían encontrar en aquel lugar.
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Ella cerraba sus ojos y se dejaba acariciar por esa delicada brisa. Esa terraza era perfecta. Ciertamente, había lujo en aquel lugar, sus manteles de seda que vestían esas elegantes mesas estilo Luis XV con esa exquisita pátina dorada que hacía juego con las cómodas sillas y esos hermosos y enormes bouquets de exquisitas flores que adornaban cada una de las mesas, hacían que el ambiente fuera inigualable.
Pero a ella no le importaba el lujo, aunque su vida estaba rodeada de él. Vez tras vez volvía a aquel lugar, no importa lo lejos que estuviera del Hotel donde se hospedaba siempre.
-Señorita Andrew, Señorita Andrew. Dijo George repetidamente con su educada y calmada voz.
-Disculpa George, por un momento me dejé llevar por la magnificencia del lugar.
-Su orden estará aquí muy pronto.
-Lo sé George, muchas gracias. Pero cuéntame, me dices que llegaste aquí hace casi veinticinco años, pero ¿qué fue lo que te trajo aquí?.
-Yo tenía 32 años, Señorita Andrew y era un bohemio empedernido. Había escuchado mucho sobre la ciudad de los sueños, y no hubo nada que me impidiera venir a conocerla.
-Estuve en cada rincón, en cada calle, en cada mercado, probé todas los Crêpes (lo dice entre risas, mientras ella también ríe), y solo así supe, que no era cierto lo que decían de este lugar, porque la verdad es que nadie es capaz de contar lo maravillosa e increíble que es, quien conoce a la Ciudad de los Sueños, nunca más estará pleno en otro lugar. Pero luego, señorita Andrew, le tocó el turno a este lado de la ciudad y quedé perdidamente enamorado. (Continuaba George)
Pero unos años después, fue que llegó el verdadero amor que logro encadenarme de por vida este lugar. Mi querida Lousie. Dijo George emitiendo un gran suspiro.
-Oh George, ¿Louise es tu esposa?
-No, señorita Andrew, nos amamos con locura y apasionadamente, pero sus padres se opusieron porque decían que era muy joven y se la llevaron lejos de mí, más nunca volví a verla, y aquí estoy. Cada vez que veo hacia esa vereda, la veo correr, hacía mi y sonreírme, como cuando esperaba que terminara de trabajar y pudiéramos disfrutar el ocaso allí mismo a orillas de este hermoso lago.
-Oh George, cuanto lo siento, ¡de veras!
-No se preocupe Señorita Andrew, a pesar de eso, he tenido una buena vida y he conocido a lo largo del tiempo a personas increíble como usted, que ya casi se han convertido en familia. Lo dice George mientras se ríe con picardía.
-Mi querido George, también estoy agradecida por haberte conocido desde hace ya bastante tiempo.
-Gracias Señorita Andrew, ahora iré por sus Crêpes.
Divinamente, Ann disfrutó sus Crêpes junto a su café negro, mientras la brisa continuaba rozando sus mejillas, mientras su mente y su corazón se perdían en la distancia.
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Como siempre, Ann fue gentil, y se despidió de George de forma muy cariñosa y agradeciendo sus servicios, pero en especial su compañía con una generosa propina.
-Ya mañana vuelvo a casa George, así que tardará un tiempo hasta que vuelva otra vez.
-Hasta pronto, Señorita Andrew, que el tiempo sea tan bondadoso con usted como lo es usted conmigo.
Ann y George se despidieron tal y como sucedía varias veces al año durante los últimos 10 años. Cada uno siguió su vida, tal y como había estado hasta entonces. George siguió siendo amable y alegrando los corazones de quienes pasaban por Le Château du Lac, será por casualidad o tal vez no. Pero así sucedía, y no fueron pocos quienes vieron en él, esa persona que necesitaba en su vida.
Unos meses después, Ann recibió una llamada, era de su amigo Frank, quien desde hacía algunos años, estaba ayudando a Ann a encontrar a sus verdaderos padres. Pero esta vez, Frank, por primera vez, tenía importantes noticias.
-Ann
-Frank, ¿eres tú? Dime por favor, dime que esta vez si tienes buenas noticias para mí.
-Ann, esta vez sí. Estoy tan emocionado que apenas me estoy enterando y te he llamado.
-Por fin Ann, ya sé cuál es el nombre de tu madre, ella tenía tan solo 17 años cuando te tuvo, pero no sobrevivió al parto y sus padres te entregaron en orfanato. Lo lamento mucho, Ann.
Ann se quedó en silencio, pues siempre tuvo la esperanza de encontrar a sus padres con vida. Y luego de unos segundo, que parecían toda una eternidad, dijo:
-Oh Frank, me dijiste que eran buenas noticias, pero eso es tan triste.
-Ella se llamaba Louise, fue todo lo que logre averiguar, y de tu padre nadie sabe.
De repente la mente de Ann comenzó a dar vueltas, las escenas en su cabeza pasaban tan raído, como acumulando las que le servían y descartando la que no, como juntando las piezas de un rompecabezas. Fruncía el ceño, cerraba los ojos, apretaba los labios, caminaba de un lado a otro, pero ¿será posible?, se repetía una y otra vez.
Pocos días después, Ann se encontraba nuevamente en la Ciudad de los Sueños, mucho antes de lo que, siquiera, se imaginaba que podía regresar. Con solo poner su pie en tierra, sabía a donde tenía que ir. Por eso, apresuradamente tomó un taxi y se dirigió a Le Château du Lac, donde intempestivamente entró y miró a todos lados, pero no lo encontraba.
-George, por favor, ¿dónde está George?, le preguntó al Monsieur que venía hacia ella.
-Disculpe Señorita, pero George no está, puede tomar asiento por acá que yo tomaré su orden.
-No, lo siento, usted no entiende, yo necesito hablar con George, ¿dónde está él?, ¿dónde lo puedo localizar?.
Hubo un silencio sepulcral por unos segundos. El Monsieur suspiró y le dijo:
-George ha muerto. El lunes temprano, no se presentó a trabajar como lo hacía por costumbre y al tratar de localizarlo lo hallaron muerto en su habitación, lo siento mucho.
El corazón acelerado de Ann, latía a mayor velocidad. Una sensación de tristeza y desesperación invadieron todo su cuerpo. Pero ¿sería posible?, tal vez ya nunca lo sabría.
Con certeza Ann volvería, al mismo sitio, se sentaría en la misma terraza con la misma vista, ordenaría su café, pero en especial los Crêpes Suzette. Seguro que sí, claro que si volvería, pero ya no con la misma frecuencia.
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Hi @marbrym. We would love to curate your story, but first please fix the source links for your images. They must link directly to the image source. For example, the image of the crepes should link here: https://pixabay.com/es/photos/panqueques-delicioso-postre-3926009/. Please change the Pixabay link under each image to point to the image source on Pixabay, not to Pixabay.com. Thank you!
Sorry for the inconvenience with the fonts. It never happened to me. But I would like you to verify something, below the source there is not only the link to Pixabay, but also the direct link to the author's gallery. That link appears automatically when I download on pixabay to give credit to the author of the image. I still have to change it? For example, in the photograph you quote, the name Rita E appears, who is the owner of the photograph and clicking on it opens directly the gallery of that person. But there is no problem if you require it.
Anyway, I fixed it like you said.😊😊
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He hadn't quite understood her suggestion. But I have already made the necessary corrections. I hope to have your opinion @theinkwell.
I understand such feelings. A mixed one for that matter. Thank you for the lovely story.
Thank you so much for reading my story and for letting me know your comment 😊
Your post sounds so poetic and full of love that I didn't miss a coma or ful stop. Beautiful post 🎉
Oh what beautiful words. It is a privilege to receive such comments from you, very grateful
Poor Ann. She must've felt devastated to hear the bad news.
Hearing about people I know passing away is painful.
This is a very well constructed story. Readers will be annoyed with you. That shows your writing is good. Readers will feel greatly the loss of George, and Ann. It is good that the parentage is uncertain. It would have stretched credulity a bit if George had turned out to be Ann's father. As it is, we are left to wonder.
Great use of the prompt and you certainly avoided author intrusion. Thank you for sharing this interesting story with us. We appreciate that you support other writers in the community.
At first, I didn't know what direction the story would take but towards the end, I was moved by her emotion. It all just felt so expected that George was the one she searched for. I'm sad because I hoped he would have been able to properly hold her as his daughter before his death but I guess Ann will live with the knowledge that in the while she knew him, she was kind to him.
What nice words friend. Yes, the beautiful thing is that she enjoyed him, even without knowing that he was her father they were both gentle to each other and earned a place in every heart. And although he suffered out of love, she knew he was not bitter and I consider him to have had a good life. Loved your comment 😊
I liked the story. Glad I got to read it.
I also liked that you read it 😃
Too bad Ann didn't get her father. She was left with doubt. Supposedly she would have liked it to be George.
Nice job @marbrym . You kept us in suspense until the end ... everything seemed like a love story until she turned around looking for her parents .....
Thank you for your kind comment. I love the details you were able to notice. It would really be that George was his father, or he just wished that coincidence was possible. Thank you for reading and commenting ☺️
Hello @marbrym. I read your story with much pleasure, the descriptions of that place were wonderful, they made me imagine a very beautiful place, but I was saddened by the end, I had hoped that Andrew would meet his father.
Regards
Thank you very much for your nice comment. Yes, the truth is that it was a sad ending, but as in real life we cannot always have a happy ending.
Uuu nice, I love the twist. Honestly, love some drama and revelations like this.
How cute, gpor your words. They give me a lot of encouragement. Thank you for paying attention to my story and taking the time to leave me your comment @diebitch!
Any time!