Las 12 campanadas: una version oscura / The 12 bells: a dark version

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Hola amigos de la comunidad de zona de escalofrios el cuento de hoy se titula: Las 12 campanadas: una version oscura


Habia una vez, una ciudad que ocultaba un pasado y presente oscuros, dignos de un relato tenebroso. En cada una de las casas y edificios modernos existia un reloj gigante programado para sonar doce veces justo al anochecer y cuando esto pasaba ocurria algo perturbador.

Justo en la ultima campanada, los muertos aun con gente viva despierta, salian a esa hora sin temor alguno y muchas veces gastaban bromas o le quitaban la vida a alguien que se lo merecia, o simplemente le tocaba. Para sorpresa de muchos visitantes foraneos esto era motivo de curiosidad, salian a capturar escenas y subirlas a las redes sociales para ganar seguidores y muchos lograban su objetivo incluso se hacian hasta famosos. Pero otros no corrian con la misma suerte, y ese fue el caso de un joven reportero que venia de paso por la ciudad.

El Chico se llama Dante y tenia 17 años, habia comensado a estudiar la carrera desde muy joven, y su talento lo llevo a una beca en Paris para culminar sus estudios. Pero un dia cuando se disponia a regresar a clases decidio pasar por la ciudad en cuestion y su vida culmino tragicamente sin posibilidad ni siquiera de recuperar su alma y cuerpo.

La muerte de Dante ocurrio de forma tragica e inesperada, despues de haber sido perseguido por las almas en pena y mutilado en varios pedazos su cuerpo fue lanzado a un rio negro del cual se dice que sale un portal al mismo infierno. Dante pedia ayuda aun muerto, como si quisiera que alguien lo escuchara y liberara de aquel sufrimiento. Pero, su suplica no fue escuchada y su alma fue vendida al diablo como parte de una enorme deuda de alguien del mundo de los vivos.

Para la gente que conocio al joven Dante muchos sabian quien habia hecho tal acto despiadado y hasta existian especulaciones y teorias un poco exageradas. Pero la mas preocupante era aquella teoria de que Dante no era un nieto desado y para que su abuela viviera entre los vivos muchos años mas esta despiadada y malvada señora que casi tenia 90 años cuando hizo tal hecho decidio vender su alma al diablo a cambio de la vida del chico que ni siquiera conocia y reconocia como de su familia.

Al llegar al infierno Dante se encontro con Lucifer y al ser escuchado por el rey del mal este le devolvio su vida al joven despues de haber escuchado las dos versiones de la historia. A peticion del joven Lucifer saldo la deuda de la anciana de una forma peculiar le quito su inmortalidad y la interno en una clinica de cuidados mentales y para mayor sufrimiento de esta el chico al que ella llevo al infierno debia de reconocerlo como heredero legitimo y darle hasta su juventud.

Tras lo sucedido y despues de varios años sin sonar las 12 campanadas estas vuelven a sonar pero con menor intensidad y otro timbre diferente, puesto que el diablo seguia reciviendo pedidos pero con la condicion de escuchar ambas versiones y ser un poco justo con la humanidad.



The 12 bells: a dark version

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Once upon a time, there was a city that hid a dark past and present, worthy of a dark story. In each of the modern houses and buildings there was a giant clock programmed to ring twelve times just at dusk and when this happened something disturbing would happen.

Right at the last bell, the dead, even with living people awake, came out at that hour without any fear and many times they played jokes or took the life of someone who deserved it, or simply it was their turn. To the surprise of many foreign visitors, this was a cause of curiosity, they went out to capture scenes and upload them to social networks to gain followers and many achieved their goal, even becoming famous. But others were not as lucky, and that was the case of a young reporter who was passing through the city.

The Boy's name is Dante and he was 17 years old, he had started studying the degree from a very young age, and his talent led him to a scholarship in Paris to complete his studies. But one day when he was preparing to return to class he decided to pass through the city in question and his life ended tragically without the possibility of even recovering his soul and body.

Dante's death occurred in a tragic and unexpected way, after having been chased by the lost souls and mutilated into several pieces, his body was thrown into a black river from which it is said that a portal to hell itself emerges. Dante asked for help even though he was dead, as if he wanted someone to listen to him and free him from that suffering. But, his plea was not heard and his soul was sold to the devil as part of a huge debt owed by someone from the world of the living.Hola amigos the people who knew the young Dante, many knew who had done such a ruthless act and there were even speculations and slightly exaggerated theories. But the most worrying was that theory that Dante was not an unwanted grandson and in order for his grandmother to live among the living for many more years, this ruthless and evil lady who was almost 90 years old when she did such a deed decided to sell her soul to the devil in exchange for the life of the boy he didn't even know and recognized as his family.

Upon arriving in hell, Dante met Lucifer and upon being heard by the king of evil, he restored the young man's life after having heard both versions of the story. At the request of the young Lucifer, he settled the old woman's debt in a peculiar way, taking away her immortality and placing her in a mental care clinic, and to further her suffering, the boy she took to hell had to recognize him as the legitimate heir and give him until his youth.

After what happened and after several years without ringing the 12 bells, they ring again but with less intensity and another ring since the devil was still receiving orders but with the condition of listening to both versions and being a little fair to humanity.







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Hola ☺️ Mucho gusto espero que te encuentres bien. No sé si antes te había dado la Bienvenida a la comunidad 🥰

Tu relato está interesante creo que tiene una trama gentil con el señor Lucifer 😅

Te dejaré algunos artículos que pueden servirte para mejorar la estética de tu post.

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Hola me alegra mucho que te aya gustado y gracias por la bienvenida te agradezco los tips para mejorar mis publicacion

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