The real goal

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I had been preparing for months for the half marathon in the city where I lived for reasons that are not worth mentioning today. The prize was urgent, a respite that would help me to get out of the financial predicament in which I had put myself by imprudence and impulsive, not to say, compulsive. That day, everything was joy, the party atmosphere everywhere, the morning with a radiant sun and clear sky, and many people crowded side by side at the starting line. I assumed they were family and friends of the other competitors, the line judges, and the organizers of the sporting event. I, on the other hand, was there, with no one to cheer me on. Only with the hope and firm conviction of reaching the finish line before the others, recalling past successes in my hometown.

I estimated more than a thousand runners in different categories, but I dismissed it, I visualized myself alone and focused on lengthening the stride and maintaining the pace based on breathing according to the plan and previous training. I was displaying the number 693 on my chest and back when I heard the whistle in anticipation of the starting gun. Bang! The human swarm left cohesively, as the minutes passed the dispersion appeared. Willing, I joined the vanguard platoon. In front of me, 337, a young man like me, who set a similar pace to mine.

My heartbeat, in rhythm with my increasingly long strides, made me level with 337. We both looked at each other fleetingly, without interrupting the cadence of the step. We moved forward, leaving the others behind. It was obvious that the competition in the end would be between us, the one who had more steam, energy, before the finish line.

The third aspirant to the triumph, had long since been relegated. Insurmountable minutes, but that would still be enough for him to climb the podium unless he collapsed from the effort.

I could already see the crowd around the finish banner when a strong cramp caused me to fall flat on my face on the road. The world had come to a standstill for me, and I put my forehead to the ground: everything I had fought for was slipping away in pain. Suddenly, I felt the hand of 337, who helped me up, and with effort, we both trudged the short distance to the line. The camera clicks and applause celebrated the act of sporting solidarity. I felt small and unworthy of the prize. He smiled at me and said: "you would have done the same for me".

I don't know, but now I am sure.

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An original short story by @janaveda in Spanish and translated to English with www.deepl.com (free version)

Image by Mohamed Hassan on Pixabay

Thanks for reading me. I hope this fiction is to your liking. I would very much like to read your comments in this regard to enrich myself with your criticism.


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I understand the feeling when you watch your effort going down the drain just at the eleventh hour but your competitor was kind enough to assist you reach the finish line. That was so nice if him...
You shouldn't feel unworthy of the prize, after all you made effort but just couldn't control the circumstances that tried to stop you.. however someone was there to assist you!

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Yes, the gesture of solidarity from a competitor, when you fall from grace, is evidence that hope remains in the world. All is not lost.

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In any sport each participant wants to be the winner. One puts in the hard work by training and everyone hopes for a favourable outcome. Falling on the homestretch must have felt like the end of the world. It is a true show of sportmanship that your main competitor helped you across the finish line. That is truly amazing. Did you share the prize money?

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Yes, Competitor 693, learned his lesson and after paying the bills, for sure, invested the rest of the prize money in assisting others.

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I can only imagine the celebrations from the crowds when your main contender helped you to cross the finish line. That is such a selfless act and demonstrates good sportmanship and is so commendable. Clearly number 337 was not in the race for only the money. Even if he was - he changed his mind and behaviour. You ended your post with

I don't know, but now I am sure.

It is understandable that your initial perspective will be different after this experience due to the kindness of participant #337. Isn't it lovely that, despite the negativity we often see on the news, some individuals have a big heart and will still be nice to strangers.

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I believe that the world is full of wonderful and kind people, it's just that the headlines go to those who do evil. Moreover, we must learn to see the good in others, and avoid encouraging bad attitudes with words.

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Competidores solidarios. Una aleccionadora fábula, digna del moderno Esopo llamado @janaveda.
Un gran relato, como todos a los que nos tiene acostumbrados. Sin duda el mundo sigue existiendo, gracias a la bondad presente, aunque a veces parezca muy menguada.

Salud, un fuerte abrazo.
Por aquí aclimatándonos al otoño austral, en 5 días inicia el invierno.

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Hola, Félix

Es bueno saber que llegastes bien a tu nuevo hogar, y que se estén aclimátandose al sur. Bueno, ya me contarás esas peripecias en el destino que les ocupa ahora. Gracias por tu siempre generosas palabras.

Saludos.

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Hola, Javier.

Todo bien. Un fin de semana, viernes, sábado y domingo, envuelto en un aire de irrealidad. Una ciudad que parece arrancada de Europa, los nuevos acentos, y en medio la familia y amigos, dándonos la bienvenida, terminamos reunidos con doce orientales a los que solo falto sacar las cartas para una partida de truco. Sancocho sin casabe, cervezas de casi un litro (no me tome ni un tercio) y solo el café con el mismo sabor.
Ya contaré más, en la medida que me ubicó, de momento salir a la calle es como entrar en una nevera, ojalá no baje más la temperatura, aunque diciembre me aseguran que será calurosa en extremo.

Salud, hasta pronto.

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Me alegro por vosotros en este periplo que recién empiezan.

Saludos.

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