Accident at Christmas (ENG-SPA)

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John turned left onto the freeway. The posts lined with red and green flowers and bows, nutcrackers, and other Christmas decorations along the way reminded him of the expense he had just made at the big department store in town. He had a habit of leaving to the last minute the purchase of the gifts that would be waiting for his children at the foot of the tree. But he wasn't the only one, he saw hundreds like him, crowded at the festive wrapping tables and cash registers. He was lucky to find the doll for Roxie, and the baseball glove for little Tommy, just as he'd heard them ask the store's Santa three days before when they were looking for the necessities for the big dinner.

He looked at his wristwatch; he was still on time. Although he was exhausted from the office chores, getting things in order so he wouldn't have any unfinished business when he returned, he knew how important it was to celebrate Christmas as a family. He imagined everyone sitting around the table, singing Christmas carols and playing riddles. He was looking forward to a splendid evening in the company of his wife Patricia's parents, who had traveled especially from the interior for this beautiful occasion.

He switched to the fast lane and accelerated until he reached the speed limit. He went on for quite a while until he had to brake at the imminence of the red lights of the cars that were almost stopped. He turned down the music and asked the voice assistant on his phone for information about the road. The sweet voice told him about a two-vehicle collision a hundred meters away with serious injuries, and that the authorities were on the scene. He thought about those unfortunate people and how a potential night of fun had changed in a split second. Although they were strangers to him, he prayed for them. He imagined being in that situation.

He moved forward until he reached the beginning of the traffic jam, to his surprise he recognized one of the stricken vehicles. It belonged to Peter, a colleague from the office, who hours before, during a break, had shown him the toys that Santa would give to his three daughters that night. He felt a pang of regret and wanted to pull over to help him, but was prevented from doing so by the policemen. He thought, I understand, that he would be another nuisance. In the end, everyone had to get home in time to celebrate Christmas dinner. In any case, ambulances were already on site to evacuate them.

John drove very cautiously until he reached his home. On the porch, the beautiful smiles of his children brightened his eyes. He parked the car. The gifts were safely in sight of the children, who scrutinized the interior to detect only bags of wine, packages of cookies and candy, and Christmas bread, such as Patricia requested. When he got off, he hugged and kissed them all. He felt that he was privileged and very lucky compared to Peter that night. He called Justina, his friend's wife, with his heart in his hand. Santa had been good to him, the injuries were not as severe as first thought and he had already been discharged. Soon Peter would be home with his family.

At dinner, John said a prayer for his friend's health and gave thanks for the wonderful evening they were having. Laughter came and went after each failed guess. The grandparents were lavish with love and would let themselves do anything for Roxie and Tommy. So the night went on until the children had to go to bed so Santa could do his job.

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A short story by @janaveda. Originally written in Spanish and translated into English with www.deepl.com (Free)

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John dobló a la izquierda para ingresar a la autopista. Los postes adornados de flores y lazos de color rojo y verde, de cascanueces y de otros motivos navideños a lo largo del camino, le recordaban el gasto que acababa de realizar en la gran tienda por departamento de la ciudad. Tenía la manía de dejar para última hora la compra de los regalos que esperarían sus hijos al pie del árbol. Pero no era el único, vio a cientos como él, agolpados en las mesas de las festivas envolturas y en las cajas registradoras. Tuvo suerte de hallar la muñeca para Roxie, y el guante de béisbol para el pequeño Tommy, tales como los escuchó pedirles al Santa de la tienda hacía solo tres días antes, cuando buscaban lo necesario para la gran cena.

Miró, el reloj de pulsera, aún estaba a tiempo. Aunque estaba agotado por la faena de la oficina, poniendo en orden los asuntos para no tener pendientes al retorno, sabía lo importante de la celebración de la Navidad en familia. Imaginaba a todos sentados en la mesa, cantando villancicos y jugando a las adivinanzas. Auguraba una noche espléndida en compañía de los padres de su esposa Patricia, quienes viajaron especialmente desde el interior para esta hermosa ocasión.

Cambio al canal rápido y aceleró hasta alcanzar el límite de la velocidad permitida. Así avanzó un buen trecho, hasta que tuvo que frenar ante la inminencia de las luces rojas de los carros casi detenidos. Bajó el volumen de la música y le pidió al asistente de voz de su teléfono información sobre la vía. La dulce voz le dijo sobre una colisión de dos vehículos a cien metros con heridos graves, y que las autoridades estaban en el sitio. Pensó, en aquellas personas desafortunadas y en cómo una potencial noche de diversión había cambiado en una fracción de segundo. Aunque les eran desconocidos, oró por ellas. Imagino estar en aquella situación.

Avanzó hasta llegar al inicio del atasco, para su sorpresa reconoció a uno de los vehículos siniestrados. Era el de Peter, un colega de la oficina, quien horas antes, en un receso, le había mostrado los juguetes que Santa les daría a sus tres hijas esa noche. Sintió un gran pesar y quiso aparcar para ayudarle, pero los policías se lo impidieron. Pensó, entiendo, que sería otro estorbo. Al final, todos debían llegar a tiempo a sus casas para celebrar la cena de Navidad. En todo caso, ya las ambulancias estaban en el sitio para evacuarlos.

John condujo con mucha precaución hasta llegar a su casa. En el pórtico, las hermosas sonrisas de sus hijos lo iluminaron. Aparcó el carro. Los regalos estaban seguros a la vista de los niños, quienes escrutaban el interior para detectar solo bolsas con vinos, paquetes de galletas y caramelos, y panes navideños, tales como se lo pidió Patricia. Al bajarse, los abrasó y los besó a todos. Sintió que él era un privilegiado y muy afortunado en comparación con Peter en esa noche. Llamó a Justina, la esposa de su amigo, con el corazón en la mano. Santa había sido buena con él, las lesiones no fueron tan graves como se pensó en un principio y ya lo habían dado de alta. Pronto Peter estaría en su casa con su familia.

En la cena, John elevó una oración por la salud de su amigo, y dio gracia por la estupenda velada que estaban teniendo. Las risas iban y venían tras cada adivinanza fallida. Los abuelos eran pródigos en amor y se dejaban hacer de todo por Roxie y Tommy. Así transcurrió la noche hasta que los niños debieron acostarse para que Santa hiciera su trabajo.

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Un microrrelato original de @janaveda

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John must have been quite shocked that his colleague Peter was in the accident that caused the traffic jam. However all is well that ends well. John got home on time and Peter was released and could spend Christmas at home.
We are all reminded to drive safely as we travel home for the holidays.

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As far as I know! Christmas stories have happy endings, and this one would be no exception.

Greetings.

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