It was or it was not?

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#Marchinleo prompting childhood memories. What shall I do?

It was or it was not?

Small city, no pity
for the weak, the week was all
going so fast,
we know it wouldn't last.

All day outside,
fotball, running, pride,
sandwich on the side,
going home when the light
was off.

My town is there, my old building,
the bench in the park where I miss
the first kiss,
the barbecue on the fields, the garden,
the canal, the annual prize contest
in the school backyard,
the glass shard, the stadium,
everything is still there

But even if all is waiting for me
to come back, to be
the one that I was back then,
I can never go home.

The place may be the usual,
but the time is not the same,
cannot win this game
unless
I learn how to turn back the time.

I am still fine.

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I am still fine.

You are Alive my friend
Have an awesome one
@heruvim1978
Great poem
!ALIVE
!BBH
I will be including this content on the @heartbeatonhive curation collection
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You have a very sharp and active memories thereby remembering your childhood memories. Best wishes.

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What a great memory. Keep it up.
!ALIVE

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The place may be the usual,
but the time is not the same

That' quite true, George. Time has been changed a lot. Even the place as well.

A good poem, by the way :)

#aliveandthriving

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Thanks, I nkow what I feel, translating it into words is the hard part.

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Your poetic prose are lovely indeed! We may not be able to go back to a past version of ourselves, but that self is alive within us still, ready to be reborn in this NowHere, new and ancient simultaneously. Thank you for sharing your inspiration! 😁 🙏 💚 ✨ 🤙

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Here and now is the hard part. So many memories, so many future plans.

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NowHere may not be easy, but it's where the magic happens! 😁 🙏 💚 ✨ 🤙

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This is a very beautiful text, a great interpretation of our topic of the day.


Please consider posting to a community related to poetry or free writing, since Leo Finance is a niche for finances and crypto. This is a Inleo initiative, not a Leo Finance initiative. If you have questions about it let me know.

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oh, i did use the poetry tags, i think leofinance is there automatically, forgot to delete it.

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I mean the community, not just the tag. You have several posts similar to this in the community Leo Finance (is currently default just as the tag so if you want them just in your blog you have to select "My Blog") and they could do better con communities dedicated to writing and literature.

They will still participate for leo.voter curation if made from Inleo.

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oh, I understand. never seen that until know. the community is the one up, not the tag. I got it now.

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Don't we all wish we could turn back time? My small town is now a tourist trap.
!ALIVE
!LOLZ

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Nice poem. Turning back the hands of time is really hard.

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Childhood memories could be sweet and sour as the case may be. A blend of the two in play here. Nice poem.

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