As the sun rose on the horizon, .....

As the sun rose on the horizon, it became clear what had happened.

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like he has been doing for the past few weeks, talking silently on the phone with people I don't know, without letting me hear their discussion. Stepping outside to pick up his calls.

Today, he nervously took his ringing cell phone while we were still in bed and kissed me on the cheeks to be sure I was still asleep.

While I pretended not to be aware of what he was doing, he stepped silently and walked away to the sitting room.

Is he cheating on me? no, no, no, he better not. But why has he changed all of a sudden? leaving my presence to pick up his calls? He was never like this, this is driving me crazy. Today I will have to tell him my mind, he just has to explain to me why he chose to become so mysterious, leaving me to wonder in my little brain. And he better give me a very good explanation or else….hmmm.



These were my thoughts and some more rumblings going on, in my head, as I left the bedroom, silently to avoid him not to hear the sound of my toes. Gently walked towards the sitting room so I could hear whom he was talking to on the phone this time around.

But just before I took the last step of the staircase down the sitting room, the rising sun outside hadn't reached the room just yet, and everywhere was still a bit dark.

The whole curtains of the room were at the same time shifted to one side of the windows, by God knows who. This allowed the bright sunrise outside to illuminate the room and bring out to life the beautiful decoration that had taken place. Probably before I was up from bed that morning.

At a glance, I could spot my favorite things, beautiful flowers, royal candle lights, balloons well placed at their appropriate places, cakes, and many ramped presents in the corner of the room.

As I was still trying to figure out if I was dreaming or if this was all real, It caught my attention, the faces in the room, smiling and cheering me on.

I wanted to say Mom... how did you get here? But my mouth was only wide open without a word coming out.

My best friend Marry, my former boss with whom we happened to be very close, Dad, and my siblings were all smiling at me.

and just before anyone could satisfy my curiosity by answering my question they all started singing a Happy Birthday 🎉 song.

'Happy birthday to you.............'

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He came from nowhere, probably where he had been standing all this while and watching my reaction to his surprise package, and whispered into my ear

Happy birthday to you darling wife🥰 I'm sorry I have been taking all those calls behind your back, I just wanted to surprise you.

I held my breath as I could barely breathe and all I could muster was you could have killed me but thank you and I'm grateful for bringing all the important people in my life into my birthday celebration.

And then, the celebration begins.....



This is a fictional thought in response to this month's Neoxian City Prompt #11. Feel free to leave me some comments, thank you very much for stopping by and for your support.

...The End...

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For a moment, I thought this actually happened 😀..I can only imagine how agitated the wife was when she realized the sudden changes but in the end, it was worth it.

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I have missed your beautiful post for a while now @funshee. How are you and your family.
I love this fiction, it look real and some times our curiosity over something else can draw us close to the real deal.
Wishing you the best of this contest.

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Awe🥰🥰☺ thank you very much ma, I have missed you as well.

You have been rare these days, I hope you are doing great? I and the family are doing great as well. 🙏🙏😊🥰

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My dear, a lot of responsibility, health challenge and my course is really affecting my consistency on hive

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Oh, I wish you good health ma. Do take good care of yourself.❤❤❤❤ and I hope we can have you active here again very soon.

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Hello, @funshee

Very nice story, an example of how uncertainty can generate suspicion. Of course, in your case, it had a happy ending,

Greetings.

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Hi, @janaveda thank you very much for stopping by.🥰🙏

And yeah, it is relieving that in the end, everything turns out well.

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Fun reading this piece of the story.

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Thank you very much, I'm glad to share.

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Interesting fiction story. At first it's full of suspicions and uncertainty but a happy ending. Enjoyed it. Best wishes.

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Thank you so much, and I'm glad you have a nice read.

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Lovely, patience is a rear quality, we all need it.

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Thank you!

Being patience is definitely a great value.

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Interesting story.
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I like the twist that your story took! What a beautiful surprise! Thanks much for sharing! Happy Thursday! 😁 🙏 💚 ✨ 🤙

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I'm glad you find my story very interesting, and thank you for dropping me a nice comment.

Do have a blissful Thursday as well.

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You're very welcome, most definitely! Thank you! May your Friday be fantastic! 😁🙏💚✨🤙

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Your story demonstrates that assumptions and speculation can cause one to worry unnecessarily. Communicating openly is alwasy the best thing to do. The surprise birthdday and gather of loved ones is certainly a happy ending to all those thoughts of concern. There are lessons to be learnt from this scenario.

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Yes, it is always best to carry our partners along with our plans to avoid unnecessary suspicions or jeopardizing our relationships.

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I love how the story ended, really! That's the depiction of what we call a happy ending.
I can't blame the husband though, men have this trait of wanting to surprise their beloved, I mean they cherish their partners and want to always surprise them with things. This is all if true love exists though.

Thanks for sharing.

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I'm glad you enjoyed the story, and yeah love always wins in the end.

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That is an amazing picture of the horizon
@funshee 😎
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Thank you so much, I'm grateful for your kindness.

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Sometimes we are curious to know why the sudden change. It becomes difficult to deal with when there's a communication gap. As humans, a lot of thoughts will flood our mind until we get clarification. That was a big birthday surprise with your loved ones around you..it's a happy ending indeed
Thanks for participating 😇✅
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It is great that things turned out well at the end, it could have taken a different turn.

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