Tonight
this is the final straw
I can't take it anymore
all that's left in me is anger
regrets and despair
I can feel the world gazing at me
I feel the shame
I want it all to end tonight
I'm a falling star
fading into nothingness
to be forgotten
at least I burn out in glory
My light turned into darkness
no insight can make it right
I don't want to fight
I've given up already
my thoughts are filled with draughts
I've unlocked all the thoughts I have inside
I can't hold it in anymore
implode or explode
It doesn't matter
It ends tonight
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implode or explode
It doesn't matter
It ends tonight
These last lines sound like the words a person says before they commit suicide😃.
Eitherways, I like the progression of the poem. It sounds like a person in distress. A person who is on the verge of giving up.
Yeah, you're right. It's what the poem was all about. I'm glad you enjoyed this piece.
Thank you
It's always a pleasure 🤗✨
I think a little hope would have been nice in this poem, like the speaker's attitude is negative, it's like everything is done and finished for him/her, but it sure does show the feelings of the speaker very well.
Thanks for sharing.