Urban! [Poem Of Sadness!]
Urban!
For me,
Pain is like a siren's song!
beckoning me O'r and O'r again
to the city's throng.
Sometimes,
I find my strength is gone.
The subtle shot engulfs my ears
and my dreams are smothered
by smog and tears!
My heart,
can no longer cope.
My sight longs to the sky;
respite from this hellish cry-
'm searching for a place
to lay my hopes up!
I know,
Thy city is a cruel mistress,
its streets are lined with pain;
where dreams are broken everyday
and my gloomy heart lingers for rain.
Notice,
The hopes are thick and heavy,
like a burden you can't bear;
And the sky becomes dreary grey.
Can your heart intensify-
the subtle sadness;
of each harsh and truth of passing day?
And,
the cobblestones filled with tears;
the narrow alleys paved with my grief?
I hear the symphony of disbelief-
why people march on
to the numb to shed a tear!
So,
I cry for the agony in the air.
The echoes shads in the alleys,
like the mournful melody!
And news of a caged bird’s despair.
Do you,
long for a place of serenity!
Do you seek reprieve?-
where the only sound is-
the whisper of gentle breeze;
far away from bustling city street!
Unlike you,
My heart also aches
with the pain of life,
Your stress and worries to strife.
But believe me,
in nature's tranquility lies peace!
With💙
©chrysanthemum
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The chaos of the city versus the tranquility of nature! This is touching. You poem is moody and reflective. Your use of imagery and metaphor deepens the emotion in this poem. Amidst the chaos, a place of serenity is a must, even if it's within oneself. I !LUV this! 🙂
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True that! Thank you for your wonderful feedback. Nature is indeed a true friend having the tranquillity and peace within. I'm a lover of nature and it is my favourite topic to work with. I'm so happy you've liked my composition. And for inspiring me to come up with more....
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That is beautiful @chrysanthemum, Yes, I ache for that serenity and tranquility!
Thank you for your inspiring words. I'm so happy you liked it. And it’s great to know that you are on the same team..
Best Wishes!
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Heart-aching poem of longing for peace of mind and tranquility sometimes found away from the urban environment. I live in the city and things can get hectic, so I also make sure to enjoy a hike in nature now and then. It's great for serenity. Great poem!
Thank you @litguru for your wonderful feedback. My happiness knows no bounds that you've liked my poem. Indeed there is charm in city life but I prefer the enchantment with nature. And I know it has a healing power to drive away all the drawbacks of our hectic life.
Best wishes for you...
Very nice visuals described in your poems. I guess I do long for a place of serenity...Thank You for transmitting this through your poem.