Rain Of Stars
In the night, vibrant night.
Stars came down, rushed down.
Lights off, vibrant environment turned off.
Life is hanging, dark night is laughing.
Visible stars, rain of stars.
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Beautiful scene. The use of repetition in the second part of the verse still works, it doesn't bore. However, I liked that one of the lines breaks the repetition ("Life is hanging, dark night is laughing."), even though it maintains an internal rhyme. Very well done. Greetings!
Thank you so much.