RE: Something in the wind
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The descriptive language used to depict the settings like the cabin, brook, and scenery help immerse the reader in the story world. The imagery of Lucy's hair being tucked behind her ear and the faint whisper create an eerie mood. Nicely written one.
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Awwnn. I am glad you loved it. Thank you so much for paying attention to those details and pointing them out.. I appreciate you.