fresh air rushes in
Experiments in writing, in music, in art, in anything really, are hit and miss. Sometimes they work, and sometimes they don’t. And sometimes they work and don’t work at the same time, depending on who you ask.
Over the weekend, I conducted an experimental haiku workshop at an ambient music event that was loosely related to haiku. I presented two ideas that I hoped would explore the boundaries of structure and how the structure of one art form can be used to create and inspire other art forms.
The first idea was to use basic stencils to explore the arrangement of images that could later be used as haiku writing prompts. Since a haiku typically has three parts, I proposed that participants choose three stencils that somehow communicated a story or an emotion to them when placed together. Then I had participants arrange those stencils in the order of their liking and transfer them onto paper using spray paint.
My hope was that all participants would display their finished stencils and we would have time to write haiku inspired by them, but unfortunately, we never got to that point.
The second idea was to use music symbols to make stenciled paintings that communicate rhythm. Since traditional haiku uses a structure of 5-7-5, I thought it would be interesting to arrange musical symbols in a way that creates two lines of 5 beats and one line of 7 beats. These musical composition paintings could then, I hoped, be interpreted by musicians to make experimental music.
It works. I had a friend try it. You can play the composition straight through, looping the rhythm and adjusting the melody as you see fit, or you can assign a different instrument to each line and have the two rhythms of five and seven weave in and out of each other.
It’s an interesting way to approach music, and one that could result in an infinite number of results, but again, at the workshop, we didn’t have enough time or space to see this to completion.
the birds chatter near my window
on such a drab day
walking in this cold rain
dreaming of hot sake
the fresh remains of
trampled flowers
the new me says thank you
you're finally here
in complete darkness
I move toward the light
the train doors open
fresh air rushes in
study the passing people
in Chinatown
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Very cool.
That's probably not a very arty word to describe good art but
It's cool 😎
Very cool indeed 💥
I thought the idea was a good idea. Now I just need to refine the workshop and do it in the right space.
Practice makes better.
Funny :)
I was just posting about that on Fakebook.
I think my work there is done for a while. Thank fuck.
See you here always. Practice is important. Yep <3
That's good and actually fascinating with the music. Sounds like a fun workshop! I didn't realize their was a China Town there, never occurred to me. Great Haiku, sorry I didn't see this earlier. How have you been?
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In Yokohama there’s a famous Chinatown. I don’t know how long it’s been there, but I’m guessing that it only started after Perry opened the country in 1854 or so.
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Enjoyable!