Midnight transformation: The Ink Well Prompt #87 - Plus Weekly Challenge and Prize Announcement
Greetings everyone
Welcome you all to this wonderful week hope you all are enjoying the week as for me am not cause am down in health just breathing only by the grace of God am alive today. I want to also use this medium to appreciate the inkwell community for their consistency on the hive blog and also for their wonderful topics they usually present to us by I recommend this community for that
MY JERRY AND FAMILY
Mr Jerry is survived with his lovely wife Jessica and two kids Junior and Tessy they lived happily without any problem though they were not Christians both are into business so they don't have enough time for their families because they are too busy with their business but things were not working well for them business wasn't flowing well. so it comes a day that Jessica came up with an idea of getting a house help so as to assist them do the house choice so things would be easier for them but it wasn't easy for them to get a house help them not being Christian cause them not to pray at night they face a lot of challenges they normally had attach at midnight once it is 12 midnight attached normally comes to them but they instead of them locating a church rather they choose seeing a witch doctor and that is how their problem keeps increasing they never knew Jerry mother is a witch she is the one behind their predicament reason been that her son doesn't care for her unlike when he hasn't gotten married see what a mother can do she make sure Jerry suffer much life became so miserable for Jerry and family but still he hasn't seen the needs of going to church.
here comes another Christmas celebration Jerry had to buy food stuffs cloth so he can take it to his mother when he got to the village he offered them to his lovely mother not knowing what she is even planning to do to him after dropping the things he brought he removed money also and gave his mother a hundred Thousand for her December upkeep then he left back to the city that was how his mother took the money at midnight to their covun and offer it to their queen mother that she wants her son dead on the first of January at midnight Crossing over to second of January and that was how it was approved see how far people can go, mama that carries her son for nine months can plan this, this is unbelievable
so the 31st of December, Mr Jerry went out with his family to have some fun and many more so it was so late they decided to come back home on their way back they discovered a girl at a particular place crying when they got closed to the little girl and asked her what's the problem what is she doing here at the middle of the night its midnight already she replied them that she is alone she lost her parents in a car accident and life has not been easier for her so they felt pity for her and decided to take her home when they got home since it was late already they slept the next morning before they could wake up the girl had swept everywhere wash the dishes and everywhere were neat Mr Jerry and his wife were surprised and called the to know who did the work only to discover that it was the little girl the asked her what was her name then she told them that her name is blessing and Mr Jerry replied indeed you are a blessing to this generation then they decided training her in school and taking good care of her like their own daughter.
first January it was 11:30 the spirit of God wakes the little girl and she began praying at night she was just praying and it was so loudly that Mr Jerry had to wake up and was asking what is wrong with little blessing when it was 12:00 midnight they tried killing Mr Jerry but it wasn't possible they were shocked and confused in their covun no one new that the prayer of little blessing was fighting un-behalf of them when it was serious that was when the mother to Jerry and their witch members visited them, they was fire in the house that night Mr Jerry was so surprised to see his mother and God pass through the little girl and save them the next morning Jerry mother confessed and died.
that was how the little blessing introduce them to church and they started worshipping God and their life's changed and things started working in their own favour business started flowing well a d they were happy and that was how they became Christians and served God every 12 midnight they used to pray. midnight is very dangerous be careful please.
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Hello @billionz,
You have here an interesting mix of essay and story. We don't curate essays, not at the moment anyway. Your writing is engaging. It would be good if you were able to write either an essay or a story. Or, if you are going to write a story within an essay (that's OK in some cases), then the story would have to be more complex and certainly longer.
We invite you to return and write another story for this prompt. Since you really like midnight so much, we have the impression that you could write a smashing story. We would like to read that. Remember, the challenge this week is to write a strong arc: beginning, middle and end. Give us a resounding resolution to the conflict you introduce in your story.
If you return with a story, please tag @agmoore, who will be looking to curate that.
Don't disappoint. Write something that comes to you in the middle of the night :)
Good luck.
Thanks for that correction I really appreciate
It has been corrected sir