PsyberX Character Creation Contest Entry - Neo Horizon

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(Edited)

This is my entry post for the PsyberX Character Creation Contest. Here is the contest post.

Character

Name: Neo Horizon
Age: 30
Occupation: Hitman
From: Emperor City

Weapons
As a hitman he can use many weapons. But his favorite weapons is a pair of custom-built Sa vz. 61 Skorpion submachine gun. They are fitted with muzzle shrouds, pistol grips and 30-round magazines.

Vehicles
He used to ride a Cadillac EXT in black color in Emperor City.

Character description:
His face is long and his nose sharp. He always wears a black longcoat and sun glasses even in night time. He is tall and handsome.

Abilities

  1. very high reflexive response
  2. Precognition & Awareness

Background story:

Neo Horizon is no.1 hitman in Emperor City. Emperor City is very populated city and situated adjacent system near the system Zeelis located.

Neo is an orphan and he is adopted by a leader of a very infamous gang in Emperor City. He can do whatever his father asked for. But he want to work alone. His father command hin in secret. He will not show their relationship to public. So noone knows Neo is the adopted son of this gang leader - Marvis.

Neo is now escaping from the chase of his enemys. As a hitman he was hired to kill a very rich person named Omar Crook. After he killed Omar Crook, he understands that this is just a decoy. They already made this setup and tried to kill him.

Actually it is very hard to kill him. He can sense the danger two minutes before it happens. His responsive rate is too fast so he can even dodge the bullets.

He rushed into the alley and climbed a wall and junp the place next to the wall. Before he reached the ground he sense the flctuations around him. This is like lightning are dancing around him. He can feel space itself can no longer him and he vanished on the spot.

When the chaser arrive the place Neo just jump down, they only only saw empty sapce.

"How can he disappear like this."

"How can I report back to my Boss."

"I am not very lucky this time."

They searched for half and hour throughly and went back to report their Boss.

At that time Neo was teleported to the City called Zeelis. He looks at the wall of Zeelis with unbelievable eyes. He signed as he finally escape from his pursuers, There is a medium Neon sign displaying:

Welcome to Zeelis



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wow, nice story you got there, how to think deeply to write this

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I already have this story on my mind. But I still remove something not related to the story.

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Actually it is very hard to kill him. He can sense the danger two minutes before it happens. His responsive rate is too fast so he can even dodge the bullets.

Did he learn this from Neo in The Matrix? LOL 😎 Also you have his same name, are you him! 👀

Pretty cool story man, best of luck in the contest!

I wanted to participate too but I didn't make it in time, so busy lately damn!

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Yes. I got inspiration from Neo. This is one of Neo's ability.

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I see, nice one, The Matrix is everywhere, we are The Matrix!

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Nice story you have here. Neo sounds like a very strong character.

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Actually I hate submachine guns in Left for Dead game, they are really useless but the main character's weapon seems to have been improved a lot. He also has a cool car. I think Neo has superior abilities, and I couldn't help wondering what would happen after he came to Zeelis. I really liked the story. I wish you success in the contest.

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Thank for your comment. I really want my character to be chosen.

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Awesome! I liked this part:

fitted with muzzle shrouds
I liked his weapon and enjoyed the story...sounds very "Matrix"-esque 😎

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Yes. it is very close to Neo but they live in different system.

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