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“I always stood by you waiting for your dreams to come true. You have achieved what you desired for but you have no time for me, for us. I cannot keep up with your pace now. My dreams are broken.” These were the last words Mari told Rafi.

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Good luck in the Zapfic and always say everything before it’s to late

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Thanks,ma'am. I hope you are doing well 💗

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That tells the whole story. 👀

Very well done!

It is INCREDIBLY hard to pull something like this off. Honestly. I can't even edit myself, or my stuff down to a reasonable length, half the time.

Share your secret, oh wise one!

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!LOLZ. Perhaps I like to tell the things in short 😏

Thanks for stopping by and dropping a comment with so much appreciation

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😆

Fair game.

I'll practice master Jedi.

The pleasure was mine. Flash Fiction and Micro Fiction are new to me and I love the concepts

You make it look easy.

It's not!

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Master jedi .....! 🤔

Honestly speaking fiction in long feels like a difficult task to me.

You should try short fiction. It is fun

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Ah... there should have been a comma there...

I'll practice...

And you're the jedi :)

I do hear you on the long fiction. 👍

But it is easier to have tons of words to expand...

Flash and micro is good training I think. And I suspect the internet loves it because time ...

And the way we've begun to scan and lose attention so quickly because of information overload.

So it's an art worth getting good at!

It's a good story, Amber. You pretty much summed up the whole relationship and its history in one go 👏

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And the way we've begun to scan and lose attention so quickly because of information overload

Unfortunately it is the fact of the day today. I, sometimes feel like we have lost the desire for depth and sincerity. We are just running without hearing and being heart completely. 😔

You pretty much summed up the whole relationship and its history in one go

Your words made me feel proud and humbled simultaneously. Hehe. Thanks a lot. God bless you ♥

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I, sometimes feel like we have lost the desire for depth and sincerity. We are just running without hearing and being heart completely.

This :(

We just need to realign ourselves and change direction... by walking it.

My main concern is that this is how the kids are learning to relate as "normal" :/ I wonder how it will turn out... first glance it appears not so great. Addiction and mental health challenges are on the rise big time!

But if we're talking about it... it means we can shift it!

I'm glad my feedback reached you. It was heartfelt :)

Your blessings are received with smiles and gratitude.

Have a beautiful day 😊

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My main concern is that this is how the kids are learning to relate as "normal" :/ I wonder how it will turn out... first glance it appears not so great. Addiction and mental health challenges are on the rise big time!

You are right. The generation next is being affected by what we do today. The world is heading towards a space where nobody would have time to feel for others just like robots.

But if we're talking about it... it means we can shift it!

Hehe. We can but will we? We have also been in a race.

I'm glad my feedback reached you. It was heartfelt :)

It was really nice talking to you.

Your blessings are received with smiles and gratitude.

♥️♥️♥️

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This is heartbreaking but so many times one person ends up sacrificing their dreams for the other. When will we all learn to create and allow space for each other to live their own dreams to their fullest? !ALIVE

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We think of as I. If we would think of for YOU, the things would become better.

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Absolutely, Amber 💗 And that is the essence of true love - selflessness. !PIZZA

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