Have the rains stopped ? - A Poetic Practice.
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Rain falls reflect the mood am in, dark clouds falling caving in, like tear drops on the cheeks rollin, down into the pit of gloom.
Often depression hits like a brick, slamming me on the hard wall with a massive kick, oh how I wish of an exit trick.
You ever think things are just blurry paths all up ahead, taking your every step forward to a roads end coming to a stop dead.
Dark clouds murking my plans not wanting how to come to something I will have to climb out and get back to clam blue days, are you in front?
Have you ever seen the rain, falling down all hard again, looking at the days ahead, feeling like summers dead, oh no, where are the shining sun gone.
I want to know where do lovers greave again, in this gloomy raining wet day, keeping our summers sun behind clouds and away.
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Weather is always a good device to consider emotion and health in a poetical surrounding
It is a good instigator in giving you emotional impetus definitely.
The starting is amazing the word play love it
Brick, kick and trick rhymes perfectly.
Also it's true lots of people in a state of depression always trying to find a trick to get out of the feeling of depression
Very well written
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Thank you. It is easy to come up with substance when one is experiencing the substance.
This is very well written, thanks for tagging me.
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