Have the rains stopped ? - A Poetic Practice.

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Rain falls reflect the mood am in, dark clouds falling caving in, like tear drops on the cheeks rollin, down into the pit of gloom.

Often depression hits like a brick, slamming me on the hard wall with a massive kick, oh how I wish of an exit trick.

You ever think things are just blurry paths all up ahead, taking your every step forward to a roads end coming to a stop dead.

Dark clouds murking my plans not wanting how to come to something I will have to climb out and get back to clam blue days, are you in front?

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Have you ever seen the rain, falling down all hard again, looking at the days ahead, feeling like summers dead, oh no, where are the shining sun gone.

I want to know where do lovers greave again, in this gloomy raining wet day, keeping our summers sun behind clouds and away.


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Weather is always a good device to consider emotion and health in a poetical surrounding

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It is a good instigator in giving you emotional impetus definitely.

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Often depression hits like a brick, slamming me on the hard wall with a massive kick, oh how I wish of a exit trick.

The starting is amazing the word play love it
Brick, kick and trick rhymes perfectly.

Also it's true lots of people in a state of depression always trying to find a trick to get out of the feeling of depression

Very well written
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Thank you. It is easy to come up with substance when one is experiencing the substance.

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This is very well written, thanks for tagging me.

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